| Reviews for Twelfth from the Right |
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Bella Marie Whitlock chapter 1 . 7/24/2016 So sad :'( Oh well, it was very nicely written, even if it is a tragic little sub-plot. Very pretty indeed! |
Fleur24 chapter 1 . 6/21/2014 I really like how you fleshed out his relationship with Ylenia. Its sad that she was taken from him before he could change her. |
Me chapter 1 . 11/21/2012 I love it! |
LikeYouBelieveInMe100 chapter 1 . 11/3/2011 I thought this was ok... definitely a twilight story... ylenia played bella and vladimir played edward and victor was jacob lol...at least that's how I see it lol... but anyway I like the originality of this... I would have never thought to use vladimir in a story... but this was pretty good... I'm kinda sad u didn't exactly tell what happened when victor threatened to take the glasses off... but heyy wat ever... nice job! |
Tee Hill chapter 1 . 10/30/2011 :))))))) |
MariaMe chapter 1 . 10/26/2011 i was so very sorry to read that Ylenia died.. :( shitz happens a guess.. but i hope victor dies.. no mater what and that the romanians might find peace at some point without dying.. but is your story haha so you'll do what's best cause no matter what you write you manage to make me not stop reading. have fun writing! |
crcc1014 chapter 1 . 3/15/2011 AWWW that's so sad :( I wish she would stay alive. |
xXxAllegraxXx chapter 1 . 3/15/2011 Omg, now I feel rally bad for Vladimir...He only just found her and lost her so soon. What makes it even worse is that he recieves the wrath of the werewolf for something that's not even his fault...Now I'm torn between wanting Bella and Caius safe and happy and feeling bad for the ones that are about to disrupt their happy lives... This OS shed a whole new light to the Romanians, I liked it very much! |
carmeleissle5cullen chapter 1 . 3/15/2011 so far so good |
RaindropSoup chapter 1 . 3/15/2011 Oooh. The plot thickens and thickens... But it's almost too sad! I love that you gave Vladmir this other dimension - him in love. This almost had a dreamy feel to it...like "there once was a man" type thing. I loved it. I liked seeing a different side to Vladmir and Stefan's friendship, the tidbits of vampire history, and lycanthropy facts - so cool. I especially like Ylenia - what's going to happen to her? I want to know more! Well done babe. I can't wait to find out, it's gonna be awesome - I know it! Love you ;D |
alsin chapter 1 . 3/14/2011 O OMG THAT WAS AN AWESOME CHAPTER :D seriously :) yayyyyyy you |
AlishaCad92 chapter 1 . 3/14/2011 Love it :D |
roon0 chapter 1 . 3/14/2011 Yes I like. Poor Vladimir & Ylenia. That Victor needs his arse kicking big time. :0 Until the next time. |
crazytouqewearingcannuck chapter 1 . 3/14/2011 hi - oooh i like, it is sad to know that Ylena dies, it would have been nice for at least one of the depressed duo to be happy. great job! |
The Mortal Slytherpuff chapter 1 . 3/14/2011 Great little one shot! |