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Alex Herandale chapter 2 . 7/16 could you please update it is rellay good |
tia chapter 2 . 7/26/2017 i love this story! please post more |
Finnicks lover3 chapter 1 . 7/24/2016 Please continue |
Finnicks lover3 chapter 2 . 3/26/2016 Please continue |
Tinkerlily22 chapter 2 . 2/7/2016 It's a great story. Please write more. |
TMI1066 chapter 2 . 9/6/2015 good but need more |
ILOVEYOUCLACE chapter 2 . 8/31/2015 OMG You HAVE to continue this story and update! |
oesteffel chapter 2 . 6/26/2015 Well...this was interesting but hot! I'm not sure how I feel about this because while I kind of liked it, I'm used to Jocelyn & Luke. It's strange to picture this when its not Jace/Clary or Jon/Clary even Seb/Clary. Don't get me wrong, I would read all the chapters still. 1st chapter was intense though. When did Luke go down on her the 1st time? I thought he & Jocelyn had a thing? Why did he say yes to Clary when he knew it would bind them? Was he attracted to her in the 1st place...it kind of seemed like it from the beginning monologue. Why wouldn't Clary just go & find someone her own age? Didn't she have a friend or...was she secretly inlove/infatuated with Luke in the 1st place? Please update soon & more lemons please...I know what I wrote, but it was still hot! |
only one love chapter 2 . 5/28/2015 MORE !,PLEASE:) |
Artemis Hunter 441 chapter 2 . 1/8/2015 Are you going to continue this? Many readers want that, inclueding myself. It doesn't have to be long or anything, just something that we know how the line of the book changes. And I think Clary should be pregnant, with Luke's son. It's just something I think. (You don't have to listen, neighter to the ones who're against this pairing.) #CLAYMARK! |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/20/2014 It's a great story keep writing it |
IWriteNaked chapter 2 . 10/17/2014 Luke is a hot older man. What's not to like? |
TIDTMIgirl1 chapter 2 . 8/10/2014 Please update, this is so different and cool |
ILoveSebastionAndClaceForever chapter 2 . 6/20/2014 this story plot is so fucking fucked up its not even funny! (im a horrible person when i say this but i think i kinda liked it lol) 3 #CLACE FOREVER |
DemiDemon99 chapter 2 . 4/4/2014 Please continue?! |