Would have enjoyed it if you were not so anti sakura and Sasuke first if all sakura never forced Naruto to fo anything and secondly sasuke had every right to rebel.

Wow. So Shikamaru had quite the mental image there, didn't he?

So now, he needs to work things out with both of them, to get their relationship rolling.

Overall, great work! Keep it up!

Yay I'm glad you finally updated and a good chapter at that. Also yes there were too many plot holes especially when there was an awesome 2 vs 1 battle brewing instead he went with bait and switch and that crap finish. Although I will say for as short as the Sasuke Naruto fight was I did enjoy how they didn't bs and instead went full power right away.

Also it's the anime company dragging the anime not Kishi. They easily could have put the final few chapters animated already but they probably milking it until the Boruto manga starts

Thanks for the shoutout and I'm glad I could help you out on the chapter. A good chapter and a good job you did in writing the scene between Shikamaru and his father. I'm looking forward to seeing how you will handle when Shikamaru, Temari, and Kurenai get together. You make some very valid points with regards to the manga. Keep up the great work!

Heh, well Shikamaru is in for an interesting time.

And poor Naruto. What happened in the past sucked for him.

Keep up the good work!

Have kurenai and temari rape shikumaru

Pretty cool!

Thanks for the shoutout and I'm glad I could help you out on the chapter. A good chapter and a good job on the yuri/lemon, it was very...steamy. Also I can't disagree with you about what Kishimoto has been doing lately in the canon. Keep up the great work on this and I look forward to the next update.

Well overall, a rather nice chapter. Especially the Yuri lemon. *nods*

keep up the awesome work. *nods*

Update please?

I love your story it is really interesting and i would like to see some more,i wanna know what might happen so plz keep doing your work oh im gonna read it again.i love your story keep it up.

i really enjoy all of the chapter so far but really when are u going to update and put in chapter 5

your fic is soo great! please continuous! Consider it if you read my message! i hope you do it!
is the worst when the stories are incomplete! it's so sad! most if are good as yours:C
i wanna know what happen at the end! and what gonna say kurenai to temari, and if shikamaru choose kurenai or temari (i hope he chooses kurenai indeed)

Kingkakashi was right, Your story deserves way more reviews than it already has, Great Read.

Wow! This was certainly unique, I've never read anything like this before... Simply Speechless, Goodwork