He cares more about his empire than the Doctor? I am truly disappointed at the moment with te Master. Although, it is expected when this is the Master we are talking about.

Once again, i have to say... Brilliant! These stories are fantastic. I shall head to the next story in the series... Allons-y

For a moment there I thought you were going to let us with dead Doctor and trying to work out how they are going to get him back. I like the end I just am going to miss the Master. So they remember both of the Years That Never Were? There is just one thing I don't get. Why are they always forgiving everything to the Doctor on the excuse that he is insane, but no one forgives the Master, a bit unfair. No?

Oh no no no no noooooo * howls * you can't so this. You can't kill the Master. You just can't. Even if he comes back later you just can't. I like how you showed that whatever the Master is he does have q soft spot. I mean he is evil but he is not all evil he can be good sometimes. In fact I think the Master's character is quite tragic one.

Oh you are cruel to the poor Doctor is it bad that I enjoy it? You know I always had wondered what would happen if Jack got eaten? How is he going to come back from that? I like your making them race against time and each other. The thing is unlike maybe most of your readers I hope that the Master would get there first.

I like your portrait of the Master's love. I like it how he does love the Doctor of course he does. But he wouldn't admit it and it borders more with possession and need to control than actual love. But still would tear the world apart for the Doctor. Even though that the only way to admit that he needs the Doctor is through admitting that the Doctor is useful to stop the drums. Great couple of chapters and thank you for keeping the Master in character.

Oh no Master...:( Poor Doctor and Master why did you had to separate them so tragically. It was great though. I really didn't see the twist. Please get them back together and the baby.

Loved this one. The sex scene was hot. Oh, the animal raw passion. They like it rough what can be better? Poor Jack though having to watch the one he loves so much going all googly eyed at the Master. But he has to suck it up, and get content with Ianto. The Doctor belongs to the Master. I love how this story is going. Oh, why I have the feeling that the Doctor chose Ianto?

I loved this chapter and how the Master didn't want to stay and wait to be treated is like him. I mean accepting help from humans...meh. But I'm glad that Jack managed to do it. Wouldn't do going around having suffering Master. I need to point out though that the Doctor is not the stronger telepath. He needs a touch to enter someone's mind, while not many people could withstand the Master's hypnosis. In fact from the people I can remember right now only Joe Grant could resist him to some point. Even a trained UNIT solder like Mike Yets couldn't.

The other thing is I wish you hadn't brought white coat into it. I know he is your OC villain but is becoming too repetitive.

What is the Doctor's obsession with Ianto?

Yeah you see that's the difference between the madness in the Master and the one in the Doctor. The Master might be insane but there is a method to it. He wants to control and even when mad he still managed to keep it cool and is cold genius logic so how can you not adore him. But the Doctor's madness here is pure animalistic rage. There is not logic or reasoning to it. Poor Master though please don't kill him.

Hah the Doctor's so crazy that even the Master is out of his dept there, that's interesting. The Master has always been though as the most insane time lord. I liked the twisted version of a dinner party that the Master organized, is so Master like.

Oh I really liked this one. What a twist of fate. Usually the Master is the one asking the Doctor if he can kill or blow up something, but now is the other way round. And the sex between them I always pictured is as passionate but not gentle at all. I can't stand when people make them all sticky sweet. I like what you did. Well the Doctor finally realized that he belongs to the Master, sod these blond shop girls. You have no idea how long I have waited for him to admit it. Poor Jack though why is Ianto giving him the cold shoulder?

Ok I have to confess I've read the other stories too but didn't really review because they were becoming a bit repetitive with whit coat kidnapping the Doctor and all that. But this one I have to review. You've got the Master here. And they are lovers while the Master is still a psuchopatic villain not suddenly becoming good guy. I love you for this. I'm a great Master fan. I like the idea of the paradox and how it affected and changed the year that never was. Great job. You still need s beta reader thought.

An incredible story, epic in scope, and very well-written too! 10 out of 10 stars. No, better than that-20 out of 10 stars! (I really, really, really enjoyed it-don't bother me about mathematical impossibilities!) I look forward to reading the next in your series of stories, which I'll get to soon, I expect.

The Doctor survived! :) (Well, most of him...)

The Master died! :(

It's been a good story - however, I still say that you should have put a note at the beginning saying that it uses continuity from your other fanfics - you will get readers who haven't read your other stories & aren't familiar with things like Lia & White Coat.