It's nice reading a fanfic involving Portia and Cinna without them being in a relationship. You did a good job!

Wow really liked this - but beings he is still on fire - burning with this whole picture now - the last line should say the man who is on fire...was is past as if he's already dead - If ghost Cinna were to tell the story - he could say was on fire - and I get that he had lost some of the crazy but - still his muse is still working -

Anyway - love the story - It is really just amazing - the way he ran through the glass - cool insane thing - and the staying up later and later - I can relate to that - grin. Nice job.

GAH CINNA, WHY DID YOU HAVE TO DIEEEE?