XD It was almost anticlimactic. Still, while I can't believe Sena and Monta's stupidity, and I don't much like people "claiming" other people as property as a general rule...naturally, I'm glad that creepy man was stopped from being aggressive to Mamori. Idiot. SHE SAID SHE WASN'T INTERESTED. Ugh. As for the omake...XD; Oh dear. Awfully counterproductive! Not that I mind. :P

Eep! Scary indeed. This man is really terrible! D: I wonder how Hiruma fit a bomb in that note...but somehow, his bullets and bomba never seem to cause permanent damage, do they? XD; Maybe it is a little like Tom &Jerry!

Hmm. Good question- I usually read notes at the beginning and end if there are any. Then again, I am painfully curious! It would bother me too much not knowing what they say! XD I can't help myself!

Poor Mamori! I think anybody would feel ill, after that! Hiruma is sweet, despite his rough nature, isn't he? The possessive, controlling, angry turn of Mr. Stalker's letters is very frightening! He is clearly even more dangerous than it seemed initially!

I know this was written a long time ago, so maybe not so helpful to leave reviews, but I'll do it anyway! Usually I wait til the end of the story was published and finished a long time ago, but I couldn't help it!

It IS scary! He is so creepy! No wonder Mamori is scared D: Goodness! The story overall is building nicely- I really like how you have slowly drawn in more and more details, and I like seeing different perspectives, too. I'm curious as to why Hiruma is noticing about all this!

oh my god. that man, kimo. he sure is super idiot man I ever knew. Hiruma is a human, not devil, holy water or dance obviously not work at him! hahaha.

So late review... but I still want to!

The idea is interesting! I wonder who is the stalker...
And I am really surprised Hiruma help Mamori carry the papers! Sweet

Good job!

awesome story, read it again for the third time

It wasn't an epic failure. The only real fault was Mamori not responding to Hiruma calling her his girlfriend. Otherwise, it was amusing and sweet.

Occasionally, I will read the intro notes. Often, they are repeated or excessive, so I don't pay as much attention as I might. If it's pertinant, I will start reading them. The omake was absolute adorable. You addressed Jimimaru with a Mr., likely from habit, while all the other addresses have been Japanese. I love the Hiruma/Mamori interaction. And on to more chapters, yay.

is an interesting way to refer to an unknown without giving the identity away. Usually, writers simply refer to the person as he or figure or something similar, but I like this. It's refreshing. The brackets are somewhat... redundant to me, but then again, I already know what you're explaining and this may not be the case for other readers. I like what I've read so far, though I'm a little iffy on Hiruma. On to the next chapters, ..

great story thank you so much for posting it i really enjoyed and look forward to reading more of you work in the future.

haha i liked the bad stalking and oh hiruma will scare the shit out of this stalker :D

:P good thanks

clever and you wrote it just fine so dont worry to much

:D yay cute