Thanks for the read

Well done! :) Love it when work and personal things interwine somehow :)

Fine story. The people closest to you can do the most damage. Acting like a troubled couple certainly would open Pandora's box to all sorts of unintended vulnerabilities and destruction. Thanks.

I hope the writers of this week's episode have read this! I almost never review, but this was very well done. I hope you write a Mentalist vic again soon.

You write so beautifully... such talent.

this was beautiful

Oh, I adored this. But you can add more! Seriously! Like go more in depth with what the doctor was saying about their "marriage" - PLEASE! Surely they would think more about what the doc said. I adore this story, I really do. And it works standing alone, but a sequel would be awesome. You know? Pleeeeeeeaaaaassseeee?

Awesome :)

I just found this today and I'm very glad I did. This was excellent, a great balance of laugh out loud humour and serious character development. It felt like it could've been part of an episode. Really great work.

This was absolutely stunning. I love it. You nailed the characters perfectly, and this story feels perfectly true. Great job!

I really liked this-it was hilarious at first, and then you managed to deftly turn it into poignant character/relationship study.

Mashburn! He would pick Mashburn. I really enjoyed this fic. I felt you kept everyone pretty well in character, and I liked the Doc and Jane's observations on him.

Aww, that was great! I really liked how you wove plot and character interaction here. Your Lisbon voice is perfect.

Some seriously genuine moments here. Have you considered going into script writing?

that was very sweet! i loved it!

I totally loved this story!keep up the great job...