I was crying my eyes out at chapter 11 and now I couldn't help but shed a tear of happiness at the end of chapter 13. I love it!

The only good reason I can think of why this story doesn't have a lot more reviews is you appear to have posted it all in one day.

I just read it and thought it was brilliant, you have a great writing style.

Zara

Amazing! Why the heck does this not have more Reviews?

I'm surprised that this doesn't have over 100 reviews, it's really good! Now I'm off to read the sequel!

I fell in love with this story! :D Why does it not have more reviews! You made me love Stayne! And then made me love Hatter all over again! Best AiW story I've read yet!

This was wonderful! Just to clarify, when he spike with the Scottish accent, that was the mad part of his brain right? Or the part that's madder than the rest? It confused me a little.

Other than that, I loved it!

I pray for an epilogue, but in the meantime I feel complete. Brava! Bravissima!

Three great things about this chapter:

Tarrant and Alice talking about her father

Stayne thinking about Mirana's secrets (I love the elaboration on the hints you catch in the movie)

The image of the black rose

Great dialogue with Chess. Great idea with the doppelganger!

I love this story so far, but this chapter did make me wonder. Remembering how cold Mirana was when she sentenced her sister and the Knave, this reception is almost a "Welcome Home!" I rather doubt that's how she'd react.

But then, ten years...

I cannot believe this doesn't have more reviews! You made a marvelous story and the details and the thought and care you put into it shows!

The "doppleganger" was wonderful, especially how you made Alicia the Red Queen's Champion. Stayne was a brilliant addition to the story and how he had changed. Yet you had him change and grow slowly and realistically. He may have become his own man when he left Iracebeth, but it would have indeed taken him time to understand emotions and love and other things that he had never experienced before.

How you had him interact with the Hatter was marvelous. He grew to understand him better, and even admit that the Horevendush Day was not his finest moment. You had that really sink into him during the Final Battle when he heard the screaming and dying and then Hatter's fear for Alice, coupled with his own fear for Mirana.

I really, really enjoyed this! I hope to see more from you! And...this doesn't say complete...so will there be an Epilogue? Even if not, this is a lovely ending to a gripping story. Well done!

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I'll have to review later, but chapter eleven is a repeat of chapter five, so we miss the battle!

Please fix asap! I'm dying to see how this fantastic story turns out in order!