That was sweet. I like how you had both their points of view in there. Very good.

Aww :) That's so cute! ~goes to put it on her site, to keep the first chapter company.~

Told you I'd review once I figured out how to log you out on the damn computer. Anyhoo...this is pretty good as far as fluff stories go (and you know how much I love *rolls eyes* romantic fluff).

Question. In the actual story of cats, are there actually specific cats that are mates to each other or is this just made up? I was watching the movie last night and Mistofelles and Victoria do a lot of duet dancing together, but maybe that's just because those two actors are extremely talented in dancing. Demeter and Munkustrap too, greet each other differently than the others. If you know, fill me in.

Quite poetic! Nice job!

AWWW! :) That was cute! Needs a sequel if it doesn't have one already. Is it cool if I put this fic on my site?

Very pretty! I was hoping for it to be a little longer though! You can never get enough Munk n Dem _~

Seemed sketchy and kinda lacking in detail. You know me, I like detail and description in stories, so maybe that's just me. :)