| Reviews for The Rashes, The Allergy, and The Crescent Pond |
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Amethyst Skulkyrie Cain chapter 1 . 4/24/2011 Innuendos are so cool! This is a really good ficlet :D |
Clearheart chapter 1 . 3/21/2011 Your story is actually the very first one I read a few weeks ago for the contest, and yet the scenes still remain fresh on my mind. You have a very lovely way with humor and description. I adore the way Sakura is compared to a dragon in this one, how the other nurses skirt around her bad temper, and the fact Kakashi has an allergy to dogs. No one would usually suspect Kakashi of having such an allergy, but you brought out that interesting distinction between the kuchiyose and real dogs. It was a very creative thought. Thanks for a fun read! I hope you'll be sharing more with us in the future. |
cutecrazyice chapter 1 . 3/19/2011 I read this way before and didn't review until now. I thought this was a fun read. And the ending was so mysterious and, in my opinion, delicious. :D |
nimblnymph chapter 1 . 3/14/2011 GEE SAKURA HOW I SYMPATHIZE WITH YOU. *grins* Congratulations, m'dear. The internets are yours for writing a fic with that dialogue in it. That absolutely cracked me up and made my day. |
JMJV chapter 1 . 3/12/2011 I'm going through the submissions for the Blindfolded contest in order and yours was an excellent opener! I liked the light-heartedness feel of the fic and LOVED your reference as Sakura as a dragon! Fits her perfectly. |
RosRua chapter 1 . 3/7/2011 I liked leaving 'it' up to the readers' minds. Thanks for a great read! |
Juniper11 chapter 1 . 3/7/2011 :D That was unexpected! LOLOLOLOL! Too funny! |
ronny-of-yore chapter 1 . 3/6/2011 The whole Rash-covered!Kakashi bit was very entertaining. I can just imagine him in that water going, "It itches," with sad face and all. Awesome job. Completely enjoyed the read. :) |
Prescripto13 chapter 1 . 3/4/2011 *giggles* The last part reminds me of the "He took it out" conversation from Seinfeld. Good work, Rinri! |
angel897 chapter 1 . 3/4/2011 i like it |