This was a good story

I am quite pourd of your dedication to keeping legions speech and thought processes in the 3ed person and the conversation between him and Tali though lacking anything particularly new or insightful was in chacter and true to the mass effect universe.

However I do have one minor complaint and that is from a story perspective as you have written legion's movements in a kind of frist person perspective. Wear most people when the writing in the frist person and they write in a similar way. For example " I walked out the door" in this you merely changed the I for we. Now while I despise frist personal narrative with a passion I did not find such writing in this story not as irritating as I uselly do. But from a story perspective its a mistake. As I fell the best storys are 3ed person.

For example Legion walked out of the AI core.

But overall I really injoyed this story I hope you write more legion/ tail.
Yours Alaster Boneman

Damn. I hope they reconcile later. ;_;

i believe that's called a fruedian slip my dear Legion... just saying...

interesting, i really need to get my lazy ass through ME1 and ME2 before 3 comes out... i mainly watched a friend play 2 :P still like the games and the concepts within, but perhaps my favorite is the dynamic between Tali and Legion, while in one you have Tali just kinda there, her primary counterpart, or as i used it often, was Wrex, but that was in the sense of the 'old' and the 'young' dynamic, so in 2 when you have Legion you have the 'bitter enemies' dynamic, i love this dymanic, probably because it makes Tali somewhat 'evil' with how obsessive she is (justifiably) when it comes to 'hating' Legion and all 'he' represents... oh the fun...

i think you have this idea pegged nicely...

till next *salute-waves* Sayonara!

-Ikasury

Legion for the win. I liked the ending. It was fitting. I see a lot of stories were the Quarian reject Geth peace, but Legion continues tryimg to convince them. Personelly, I want to see a fic were the Geth don't get involved, survive, and help the next great civilization stop the Reapers. You think that would be interesting? P.S. Liked the " we now have a soul" bit.

Legion for the win. I liked the ending. It was fitting. I see a lot of stories were the Quarian reject Geth peace, but Legion continues tryimg to convince them. Personelly, I want to see a fic were the Geth don't get involved, survive, and help the next great civilization stop the Reapers. You think that would be interesting? P.S. Liked the " we now have a soul" bit.

No trying to be cruel on the Quarians, but they don't really stand a chance against the Geth, Tali really needs to reconsider if her species has the smallest chance of coming through this unharmed.

I think Tali needs to think outside the box for ME3 if she doesn't want to be butchered like her species were in the Geth Uprising.

Good story overall.