What a brilliant story. Brilliant! Will be reading this again.

The battle scene was kind of confusing but overall I liked it :)

Just like to say thank you for two wonderful stories. Have just finished reading Trust and Long Live The King and thoroughly enjoyed the ride.
Many many thanks. Will put on my list to revisit and read again!

I had this image in my head of Merlin, Gwaine, and Lancelot walking beside Arthur and Leon without them knowing, and both groups are having two different conversations. Arthur gestures with his arm and smacks Gwaine in the stomach and feels it, but is looking around and can't see anyone there. So of course he'd probably run into him and Leon would just be confused while Merlin repeatedly rams his head against something and Lancelot looks skyward as if trying to remember why he brought Gwaine along.

Awesome :D

This was an amazing story! I am shocked it was not more popular! I loved it! Everything about it followed your plot and nothing was unused information! Amazing work!

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I liked this ending

So thrilling! :)

I absolutely love the way you write, as I am sure I have said before xDD

I've got a question though: do you like Gwaine? It's just that he is always portrayed by you as an annoying guy xD I just felt curious about it :)

I love the fact that you introduced Lancelot in the story too. I loved that guy.

Brilliant, as always :)

I'm so willing to read how you continue this amazing story! 3

(I love Gwaine, he always appears to be funny and warms the whole cold atmosphere of the story :D)

I really love the way Arthur's handling the discovery of Merlin's powers, and that confession of the sorcerer was pure love 3

(By the way, I'm adding this to favourites and to my alert list. Can't believe I haven't done it already xD)

This is brilliant, as always! I so enjoy reading your chapters, your style and wide vocabulary make it really enjoyable! 3

Let me add that I am good with slash. I mean, I don't care at all. And the original series are quite bromance by themselves, so go ahead with this! xD

I found a mistake: you use the word 'invincible' instead of 'invisible'. Just pointing it out as I thought you may like to change it :)

It's brilliant how you re-use the original series :) It was a complete relief seeing Gwaine step in the storyline! I so hope this will help Merlin with his lavish destiny

well done! I like it! The story is coming along nicely. If you want I can beta the story for you. Only if you want of course!

Good to see another chapter again; very much enjoying this story.

Omg! I just read all of this and it's absolutely amazing! I wanna know what happens next!