I cried as a child when Romana died. :( Shes one of my favourites, with Sarah Jane, Liz Shaw and Donna. She should be survive. :(

Its a beautiful story, thank you for that.

wow i love this story.

Just realised You said you had changed some stuff. So I have read the whole story again

That scene where Brax was lost in the Axis was so heart breaking made me cry *sigh* I really love Brax :D

I'm glad she saved him from it. Thats what should of happened in the Audio's, but so sad after all that that Brax died at the hands of the Daleks.

Cant believe you didn't have more reviews for this story as this story is brilliant and you have mentioned characters from the audio's and not many do.

awww her death was to sad... but I liked that he visited her before he regnerated. That should of happened on the show for sure.

I also like that they told each other they love each other and I know he goes out in the universe for her that sounded so right.

Hope you write some more Romana stories soon.

this was a beautiful ending to the story. :')

wow, this was super dark!

Romana's death scene was AMAZING though.

are you going to bring her back, or is this just a story where he reminisces on the loss?

ooh, i love this story! the Time War stuff is really brilliant.

Rassilon really did have a spitting problem...it was very gross.

god job on Romana's part for punching Rassilon. :D

I loved the Doctor and Romana. I thought they were the best couple ever besisdes Rose and the Doctor. I really really like your story.

I hope Romana is okay or she regnerates. I also like you mentioned the events of the Apocalypse events and Zagreus. and yay she punched Rassilon in the face

I love how you brought characters from the Gallifrey series in. I always hated Janartis through and now even more :D I hope that Narvin and Leela, and Brax he has to surive the time war. Well they still in the audios

And I love that part where the Doctor could no longer deny he loves Romana, so sweet.

I loved this. Seeing how Romana influenced his dealings with his companions post-Time War was just marvelous, and watching him try to pick himself up but never quite able to make it there... GAH.

The only real problem I can point out is a few minor spelling/grammar errors (for example, you keep spelling 'bury' wrong). Not a big deal, and none of them are too distracting, but you might find it advisable to do a second proofread or have someone beta for you. It's alright if you don't, because it's still basically fine without it, but it would just take it up one level higher again.

WOW.

And this is why I adore Romana. She's got that steel in her soul. She was never destined to wilt away in darkness, but stand up to it and kick dirt in its face.

This was a wonderful chapter and I'm eager for more!

I love this story :D I really really love the Gallifrey series and I love Brax and Narvin and Leela cant wait for series 4 :D

I love how Romana always wins the fight with the Doctor, the Doctor always seems determined to be alone, but he should of Romana with him and proaably the only one who really understands him.

The only thing I can think to come up with to respond to this is *sadface*

I miss Romana like you wouldn't BELIEVE, and every time I read a really good Time War fic involving her and the Doctor it always puts me all out of joint for hours because dammit, I want her to LIVE! (And maybe, just maybe, she will... as far as I'm concerned, she's not dead until they show me a body, and with the way things are headed in the current series... well...)

aww I love Romana/Doctor The only one I can really see with the Doctor. She started off as his companion I think after she become more than that like his equal.

I really hope they bring her back In all of the Doctors I especially like her with Eight.

Hope its not just a one shot as there isnt many Romana stories on FF