pretty good (So will you add Carolina that be good.)

It doesn't surprise me that Caboose has a shrine for Church. Keep writing I'm interested to see where this story is going.

Lol. This is very interesting. Please update soon.

more please! I really want to find out what happens next!

Well, an intriguing story there.

You've definitely managed to get me interested.

But, I am very disappointed by the fact that you are completely ignoring the character development of the past trilogy.

For example, Sarge has accepted the fact that there is no Red and Blue war. The relationship between Sarge and his subordinates (Grif and Simmons) has also changed.

Grif has become a sort of battle-comrade to Sarge while Simmons is more questioning of Sarge's leadership.

Also, where is Donut and Lopez?

Donut is confirmed to have survived and Lopez claimed to have made a bunch of back-ups before he got shot. So are you assuming that they're dead or? Because it seems like you are.

So, overall a great story.

But the complete resetting of the reds characters is quite jarring.

Yay for new chapter! Great job with this one, especially with the Grif abuse! You gave him just enough pain for it to be realistic to what the writers would have done. And Wash was just Bad Ass, so, you know, that was awesome too! I can't wait to see what form of mayhem Caboose is about to unleash on poor Tucker, so don't leave us waiting too long, okay? ;)

This is a very good story. Original Concept and everything. I hope you make the next chapter a bit... say, quicker than before.

I'm really interested in the plot you've introduced here, and I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with it, especially with Caboose. For you first fic in the fandom, your characterizations are quite good. Good job, and I'll be looking forward to updates.

Sweet!

Awesome looking forward to next chapter

...Make more plz? This is GLORIOUS! Absolutely wonderful! A few typos but other than that, awesome!

Great by itself, and has potential as a multichapter story.