Strangely enough, I actual enjoyed it.
For God's sake, are all your stories going to be amazing with plotlines and points and meanings that nobody else realises, and when they read this, they wish that they did -.-

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This story has been nominated for a Phoenix Award in the Best Angst category. The Phoenix Awards is an awards site geared toward the best in the Percy Jackson fandom on FanFiction . Net. Luckily for you, your story has been included in the twelve nominations available for this category. The nominating period ends on October 19, 2013. We at Phoenix would be honored if you could let the world know that you've been nominated. :)

The person who nominated this fic gave the following reason for nominating:

"This is a short, but sad one-shot that really explores the concept of fatal flaws well. Plus it is refreshing to see a character that is not a child of the Big Three or a "forebidden demigod"."

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So, may I ask what his fatal flaw was? This story was fantastic still.

good story like the percy thrown in there

I'm guessing his fatal flaw is fondness for fighting, or hubris, or heartlessness or something along those lines. Kronos told him to retreat, and he refused. He wanted to kill every last half-blood, he got killed himself.

Hello!

I'm Lily, from The Choices of a Demigod. I'm pleased to announce your story, Flaws, has been inducted into the Oneshot section of the site. :)

Your raving review: Wow, this is great. There's something simple about the way that Jocasta writes, but she manages to make it heart-wrenching at the same time. I loved the mysterious air about the narrator, Dylan's, fatal flaw at the end. It keeps the reader hanging, you know?

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Lily~

I like it. It's nice to see the fight from someone else's point of view, not Annabeth, Percy, or Luke, as is most usual. Good job, in all, and I liked the part where he thought about whether or not he even had a fatal flaw. It was kind of eye opening to the fact that most demigods really wouldn't realize their own fatal flaw like Percy and Annabeth or even Nico did. I can imagine that most demigods either don't live long enough to find out, or just never really figure it out for themselves.

Congrats on the awesome story!

-Silver

Usually, I despise OC one-shots. There's just not enough to go on.

But I realy liked this one. Congratulations! :)

It was a good concept, executed in a nearly perfect manner. The only thing I noticed was that you had a few typos and a long A/N.

Yup, this was good. :) sooooo, what WAS his fatal flaw?