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Guest chapter 3 . 10/9/2017 Very good I got despicable ME 1 - 2 on DVDS I seen despicable ME 3 in the cinema I'm going to get despicable ME 3 on DVD I like Gur and his daughters Margo and Edith and angus |
Guest chapter 3 . 6/26/2014 i am ze nuber one! veelian een de world posted by felinous gru from rushia |
usuihentai727 chapter 3 . 7/9/2013 I LOVE THE STORY! I HOPE YOU CONTINUE THIS! :D |
Katrina Roxanne chapter 3 . 2/2/2012 this is a great story. I don't know if you plan n continuing it or not, but it would be really great if you do. I especially love how you have their characterizations down pat :) |
Massinvader chapter 3 . 7/4/2011 Wow, this was simply amazing.. I really love how you captured everyone, especially Margo. Descriptions were fantastic and able to understand! I loved it, very visual and descriptive. |
ancientdragonduelist chapter 3 . 6/4/2011 Awesome story! I can't beilieve it's over. |
ancientdragonduelist chapter 2 . 6/4/2011 Awesome! I've never seen Margo let out her feelings, I mean, come on! She's only 11. Very good scence. |
Avatarcatz2323 chapter 3 . 3/8/2011 This is AWESOME! Everyone is in character, and you have good grammar. Keep writing! |
AnimationNut chapter 3 . 3/4/2011 This is an amazing story, and you are an amazing author. Everyone is in character and I love your writing style. I hope you continue this! |
MayDayGirl-Save-Our-Ships chapter 3 . 3/4/2011 To quote Edith, "When will you stop being so AWESOME?" Seriously, this fic is amazing! And I love that line in the fic, it made me crack up. Actually, there are multiple lines that had me laughing (I had to cover my mouth or my laughter would wake up my roommate). You do all the girls really well and you can really get into Margo's head. You are also excellent with those one-liners from Edith. I really like the part where Margo was questioning what Gru being a Villain meant. She seemed uncomfortable with the idea, but at the same time was impressed he stole the JumboTron. So, it sounds like she is willing to accept him being a Villain, but she might still have quite a few reservations. It would be interesting if you continued to go into detail about how she feels about Gru's career, and how she continues to come to terms with it. The fics not over now is it? There is going to be more, right? I really like how Gru explains everything to the girls about why he adopted them. I haven't seen that in fics much, so it's fun to read. And you did a really good job with it! I just like the fact you went into a lot of detail with what happened after they got rid of Vector. This fic deserves way more reviews then its getting. You are a really good writer and you do an excellent job with their characters. You're definitely one of my new favorite DM writers. Keep it up! ~Shrine |
animefan0000012345 chapter 3 . 3/3/2011 aw i hope there will be more! i can't wait for an update! |
animefan0000012345 chapter 2 . 3/2/2011 awww i love this story! margo is me fav charabter! i can't wait to read more! |
bholley chapter 2 . 3/1/2011 This is EXACTLY the type of Despicable Me fanfiction that I like to read! Well-written, deep, and Margo-centric! This is pure awesomeness and I hope your roll lasts a long time because I am enjoying this very much. |
animefan0000012345 chapter 1 . 3/1/2011 Awww this is sooooo sweet! I love it! Lol I really wanna see what gru is gonna do to miss Hattie if he finds out about the box of shame!XD and did you know that they are making a sequel to despicable me! I can't wait for it! |