| Reviews for A Birthday Surprise |
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S chapter 1 . 8/31 Enjoyed the story. Thanks. |
stevem1 chapter 1 . 8/19 This is a nice story, and pretty much how I think Ron would have ended up based on the books minus the epilogue. |
Agewalker chapter 1 . 2/9 While I don't think this is accurate to canon Ron, I could easily imagine a world where the fame of becoming a world hero and quidditch star went to his head, gradually eroding his better qualities and resulting in this. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2019 Fuck you faggot. Your cunt mother dies a whore. |
creativesm75 chapter 1 . 9/11/2018 cool |
noreenklose chapter 1 . 8/14/2018 I loved it! You captured "the moRon" perfectly. I'd love to see a story where Dumbles, the Dursleys (including Marge), Molly, moRon, Ginny, Snape, AND Umbitch received their "just deserts". I'd love you to write it...to use a VERY old phrase- - -"SOCK IT TO 'EM!" Please consider it. Thanks for writing, I'm really enjoying your stories. |
The Ghostly Minion chapter 1 . 9/18/2017 Love it. It's a companion piece to 'The Present'. Not that Ron was like that in canon, still he was thoughtless enough that this isn't an unthinkable stretch to make. I'm sure that his relationship with Lavernder would have been defended in just those sort of terms had someone brought it up. The followup set of assumptions are pure Ron too in that he never seemed to think that relationships went beyond the physical in canon. At least to the extent JKR ever portrayed them and never in a realistic manner, IMHO. And the double standard showed too. Harry had beenaway 'forever', but Hermione just jumped right into 'someone's' bed 'instantly'. The punishment is hilarious. Equally funny is Harry's last line. You could have bettered it though; he should have affected a Humphry Bogart impression. And the quote should have been 'Always knew finding the Maltese Falcon would payoff in Spades! TGM |
ElementalMaster16 chapter 1 . 12/24/2016 pretty nice one-shot! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_) |
Ryszarius chapter 1 . 10/8/2016 A funny but amusing little piece. Rather quite enjoyed it. |
Ice Demon Ranger chapter 1 . 1/7/2016 The Maltese Falcon... Lmao! Great one shot. |
deadheadwookie27 chapter 1 . 11/28/2015 Very well written and thought out. Loved it |
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 6/8/2015 its interesting to see ron's pov on Harmony, ive seen fics that do it without bashing him but he doesnt seem the type to take rejection well |
DylanL chapter 1 . 4/4/2015 I was initially very confused about who was having sex with the cheer witch in whose flat, so perhaps you should make that clearer in the beginning by combining paragraphs spoken by the same person or adding in more "Ron said", "Harry said"s. otherwise I quite liked the story. |
Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 2/27/2015 LAME movie joke, but good story! ;-P |
Sorceress of Magic chapter 1 . 8/18/2014 cuteness |