Reviews for A Birthday Surprise
S chapter 1 . 8/31
Enjoyed the story. Thanks.
stevem1 chapter 1 . 8/19
This is a nice story, and pretty much how I think Ron would have ended up based on the books minus the epilogue.
Agewalker chapter 1 . 2/9
While I don't think this is accurate to canon Ron, I could easily imagine a world where the fame of becoming a world hero and quidditch star went to his head, gradually eroding his better qualities and resulting in this.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2019
Fuck you faggot. Your cunt mother dies a whore.
creativesm75 chapter 1 . 9/11/2018
cool
noreenklose chapter 1 . 8/14/2018
I loved it!
You captured "the moRon" perfectly.
I'd love to see a story where Dumbles, the Dursleys (including Marge), Molly, moRon, Ginny, Snape, AND Umbitch received their "just deserts". I'd love you to write it...to use a VERY old phrase- - -"SOCK IT TO 'EM!"
Please consider it.
Thanks for writing, I'm really enjoying your stories.
The Ghostly Minion chapter 1 . 9/18/2017
Love it. It's a companion piece to 'The Present'.

Not that Ron was like that in canon, still he was thoughtless
enough that this isn't an unthinkable stretch to make.
I'm sure that his relationship with Lavernder would have
been defended in just those sort of terms had someone
brought it up.

The followup set of assumptions are pure Ron too in that
he never seemed to think that relationships went beyond
the physical in canon. At least to the extent JKR ever portrayed
them and never in a realistic manner, IMHO. And the double
standard showed too. Harry had beenaway 'forever', but
Hermione just jumped right into 'someone's' bed 'instantly'.

The punishment is hilarious. Equally funny is Harry's last line.
You could have bettered it though; he should have affected
a Humphry Bogart impression. And the quote should have been
'Always knew finding the Maltese Falcon would payoff in Spades!

TGM
ElementalMaster16 chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
pretty nice one-shot!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_)
Ryszarius chapter 1 . 10/8/2016
A funny but amusing little piece. Rather quite enjoyed it.
Ice Demon Ranger chapter 1 . 1/7/2016
The Maltese Falcon... Lmao! Great one shot.
deadheadwookie27 chapter 1 . 11/28/2015
Very well written and thought out. Loved it
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
its interesting to see ron's pov on Harmony, ive seen fics that do it without bashing him but he doesnt seem the type to take rejection well
DylanL chapter 1 . 4/4/2015
I was initially very confused about who was having sex with the cheer witch in whose flat, so perhaps you should make that clearer in the beginning by combining paragraphs spoken by the same person or adding in more "Ron said", "Harry said"s. otherwise I quite liked the story.
Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 2/27/2015
LAME movie joke, but good story! ;-P
Sorceress of Magic chapter 1 . 8/18/2014
cuteness
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