Hi,

I saw your authors note and just wanted to say that, even with the flaws and all and the odd error in formatting, it doesn't detract from what an amazing story this is. I remember when I first read it, I binge-read multiple chapters and loved the direction you took the story in. It's still a joy to read!

Just wanted to say that!

Your omakes are an annoying waste of brain power and breaks the flow of the story pls put them in a blog or something and stop ruining the story with unrelated junk

Since Gine, Brolly, Paragus, and a whole bunch of characters are now canon, can u write an updated version of this story. Gine still being around instead of dead already and maybe set it just after Dragon Ball Super with Goku&Vegeta training again with Whis at Beerus' planet. Maybe after Champa got his Earth back with the Universal Dragon Balls.

Goddamn it dude. Stop using your limited Japanese in the form of romaji in the story. It’s just cringy as hell.

Goku is either 2 or 3 at the time. From a quick search shows told me that he was 3 years old when he got to earth. It takes roughly a year to get to Earth so he should’ve been 2 at the time of the planet’s destruction. However, Saiyan babies are usually kept in their pod for 3 years so..

Where's Gine?

Bulma's dad invented the Hoi poi capsules, and Goku was sent to Earth as an infant just as Vegeta was being destroyed.

There's a simple reason why Goten would have problems with Cold. S-Cells are responsible for the Super Saiyan transformation. They're increased with power level and good feelings (or something like that). They're also passed down to your children. Goten might be a super saiyan, but the SS transformation amplifies your base state, and Goten's base state isn't all that powerful (relatively speaking) because he's a little kid and hasn't trained like Goku and Vegeta did. Goku or Vegeta could defeat SS Trunks and SS Goten at the same time while in their base form.

Oh my god, this Vegeta is just the best. I love the idea of him pranking, and this story is just making me smile at every scene. You do a really good job at writing the characters in, and at balancing the drama and humor. I also love the authors notes, as they are really funny and make me laugh. Thank you for writing this story, it made my day!

goku is anywhere between a few months and 2 years old i'd hazard 1

Those cringy authors notes do nothing for the story and make the chapters less fun to read, if you for whatever reason need them to be there, at least tone them down and make them less bitchy.

Wow, what an epic. I truely loved reading this story after recently rekindling my connection with dragonball.

Just about all I could gripe about is the mixing of Japanese terms and words with the English dialogue. And using the Japanese names/spellings of certain things like KORIN, and the Power Pole.

I can forgive the Nimbus and Power Pole more, though. Those are pretty much personal preference. But whenever I see "Master Karin" or "Kuriren" I mentally puke.

Anyway, you're an amazing writer, and for a fic so old, it's truly a work of art. If you're still around, keep doing what you're doing. Because it sure as shit works.

~Drunk

Shame thats over

Your author's notes is seriously as long as your chapters.

Please Do not EVER use random Japanese words unless you have a VERY good justification for doing it.

The only reason for using Japanese is:

1) Very important honorifics. And only use it if it is important to your story/characters.

2) You need to use a word that does not have an English translation and you NEED to use this word. In that case, give a translation somewhere anyways.

Go with Prince Vegeta instead of vegeta-ouji. Nothing is lost in the translation. And if anything is, no one really knows the subtleties of vegeta-ouji. People don't know what is "Nande kuso" and no one will bother looking it up. No need to use "hai" instead of "yes", "sure", or "ok".

Have you heard of someone who talks half in chinese and half in english? That is how your story sounds with these japanese.