Such a nice story, and a very clever comparison of our favorite cop and robber. I had never put together how alike Peter and Neal are-and it was sweet that in spite of his protests, Neal actually wanted it to be true!

Made me smile :-)

I loved this one. It shows the similarities between Neal and Peter (which, quite frankly, I didn't notice until I read this, but now they're there, staring at me in the face, saying, "you couldn't see it?) as well as Moz and El. I'm still quite amazed at the way you draw people (me, at least) in with the way you write.

Cindy, I LOVE the concept for this one-shot! You did a wonderful job, as usual, of capturing the authentic voices of Neal, Peter, El and Moz. I actually felt like I was at the table with them, watching the good-natured bantering, privy to the private jokes and innuendos. Lady, you are quickly becoming my favorite FF author! I plan to recommend you to my friends who are avid White Collar fans. It's so refreshing to find a really good writer in the sea of amateurs that clog the FF sites. I really hope you will pen more small vignettes such as this, with our Fab Four interacting over meals (don't you just love dinner table chitchat?). Think of the possibilities - coffee on Neal's rooftop terrace, wine at a small sidewalk cafe, an authentic tea ceremony in a Japanese tea house - the sky's the limit!

I must say, this had me grinning like a mad men.

just started on your stories...loved all the White Collar ones! :D this one is so true! i could just see all the four actors sitting on the Burke patio and enacting this scene...and all their voices are totally accurate! :D

Liked it very much

I quite like this little outing! I have always found the get-together sessions of El and Mozz to be good fodder for a great tale.

I don't know why you get low feedback turn out. You're on my authors list. I thought it was a very good story. Just remember some people read, enjoy and then get busy. Take heart.

Love it!

That was very sweet and also very amusing. You did a really good job of keeping everyone in character and I liked how the obvious slowly dawned on Peter and Neal, and that it has already dawned long ago for Elizabeth and Mozzie.

The fact that Neal and Peter kept saying the same thing at the same time also made me grin, firstly because it was proving Elizabeth and Mozzie's point but also because it felt exactly like watching the two of them onscreen.

I really enjoyed it :)

Another interesting story. The dialog flows very well. I'm looking forward to your next story. Hint, hint.

Okay your comment on getting no reviews is what got me to leave this because I thought your writing was excellent. I thought the witty back and forth was just perfect and totally works for the characters. Job well done!

Well, I like your stories - a lot! This was is no exception; it's a refreshing change from the mind numbing cycle of Neal whump. It was perfect; El and Mozzie making their points and Peter and Neal using the exact same words to object. Priceless!

THIS IS SO CUTE! I found it hard reading lines without laughing histaricly! (sp?) I honestly cannot say which is more hilarious: The content of the conversation, Mozzie & El talking about them like they weren't even there, or the fact that Neal and Peter were too stubborn to agree with them. Excellent, excellent job! I can't see why you don't get many reviews as you said, since you are clearly VERY talanted. You have the characters dead on.*favorites*