This story. Wow. Brilliantly written, emotional and beautiful. Keep up the AMAZING work...

Oh, that was so sweet! I'm all misty-eyed. Bless you!

Wonderful story.
You made it fit so well.

That was a very sweet story. :)

Very beautiful story. Good writing, also. Personally, I think that maybe you could add a little bit more about their "search" for Aslan in their world. But it's very nice just the way it is. :) When Susan was reading and had to mention Aslan's name for the first time...that was very touching. Good job!

Oh *sniff* This was so sad and beautiful. I loved Susan's reactions to different things. And that last part, where Lucy writes about Eustace and Jill about to go to Narnia, is so heart breaking, because of course Lucy didn't know what was just about to happen :(

Thumbs up for a lovely little fan fic :D

Well, that was beautiful and sad. Why did you have to make me cry? (and I mean that as a compliment)

Oh, well done!

I really loved this. And I found the picture you were talking about. So sweet!

Great work. Please write more.

Um, I've said this before, but wow! Just...wow!

I have a what-happened-to-Susan story to post, with a book written by Aunt Polly, but I like this even better. And the names are the perfect touch. *grin*

Such a bittersweet story with such a powerful last line. Your Narnian fics are amazing.

Woah. This story is AMAZING! You are a fabulous writer. Are you going to write more chapters! I am totally intrigued. Now this is the type of story I'd stay up all night to read! Absolutely perfect, and awesome!

This story is fantastic! I was soo sad that Susan (who I've always identified with being the second oldest of four, and a girl) didn't end up in Aslan's Country, but this story beautifully shows how she can still find her way back to Aslan and that there may have even been a reason for her being left behind.

Great fic!

~Caity :)

I like how Susan got her redemption. I wish Martin read it with them.

there are few Narnia fanfiction story that have with in them the magic of Marnia this story holds that magic (well done, thank you)