Oh man, this was good

Oh no! This is well done, but totally heartbreaking! :(

Oh man. I hate this and I love it. I'm hovering over the 'favorite' button, oh so very conflicted. I - I - must check.

I love this because I was always unhappy with what canon ended Donna as. Sure this fic is not daises and sunshine as the show, but I much perfer THIS to the other ending! Great fic, Rory is so under rated, it was nice to read things about him

Oh my gosh...*mind is blown*

I just adored it, I simply ADORED it. Rory and Donna (absolute favorite nu-who companions) are AWESOME.

I loved your characterization of Rory, totally perfect, and I loved Donna...it made me sad, yet I loved it!

Aww...sniff. That is actually really good, like cannon material-good. And I love the part about "Almost, bio-damped, imaginary, lost..."

You did an excellant job keeping Donna in character, and for a sadfic it was really good

WOW. I can tell you were in a bad mood when this was written. It's still good though.

OH.

Oh my GOD.

Speechless.

No words.

Can't even THINK properly.

Too insanely, bitterly wonderful and beautifully tragic.

Brain overloaded.

Oh WOW. That was absolutely heartbreaking. Wonderfully written, though; Rory was absolutely lovely, and I can see him doing this for her. And such a tragic image to see her so broken...

Ooh, you're right, that was /not/ a happy fanfic! :(

Great idea, and well-written. :)

Was the "Earthman" Wilf? (Sorry, I could be having a total blank here - only just got out of bed.)

For the more useful feedback, I'll point out two minor typos:

"she /started/ to scream"

and

"so that she could /gaze/ up at the"

Anyhoos, yeah, nice work! :)