You rock!

I loved this, I thought it was fantastic and I do hope you post more soon. :D

Nice! I liked the alternate prose/lyrical style, though in the future I would prefer more story and less lyrics. I can see the scene so well, and it all seems very real and believe able. A little more emotion would be wonderful, but other then that it was great!

Very nice! You've done very well. I only ask that next time, there's more story and less lyrics. But this is an excellent start! I'm always happy to discover other Robin/Marian shippers. :D

Very nice. i really like your take on marian and robin

please write more x

I don't think you are alone to being "hooked". I love Jonas so much that I travelled to England to met others who also fans. As you can see, I live in the USA. With your writing is so good, hope to see more.