You really do have quite a knack for unique ways to tie Kagome into the Naruto world! The whole idea of Kagome being a legendary priestess who was cursed and exists now as a doll is a brilliant way to pair her up with Kankuro. Sadly, I see that word again: discontinued. It's been a long time now. Perhaps you might find the inspiration to pick this one up again.

Only two children from Miroku? I'm in shock xD

This is cool

please continue!

this is awesome! XD

I just have to say I really enjoyed this story and I hope to see part 2&3 soon. You did a wonderful job with the characters keep up the good work and keep updating!
Thanks for sharing.

luv luv luv :3 keep up the good work!

Hahaha! That was hilarious! Poor Kankuro must be so confused. Please continue with this.

Hmmm, this is interesting so far. When are you going to update? It's been like... a year.

Anyway, I'm wondering... are there going to be any yokai in this story?

-Twinklefeather

You. Must. Continue. This.

Please update. Please update. Please update. Please update. I want an update. I NEED an update.

Okay, calming down now. First, the idea is brilliant. I really love Kankuro here. The story is so unique and very appealing. Second, oooohhh the mystery. Gosh, I would love to know who betrayed kagome. Although i have an inkling suspicion on who it is. And lastly, gaara's humor is genius! Haha.

Really, please update sooooooon. Treat it as a late christmas gift. Please.

...well...i know this'll be a long wait for the next chapter. XD

Nidia! Y U No Write More? Seriously though, this is an awesome start to what could be a very deep and involved story! Your writing style is very clean and well paced, without a lot of fluffy block text (something I myself need to work on). I'd love to see more of this storyline if you're still working on it, and I look forward to reading more of your stories!

Ooh, very interesting. The plot is so unique. I hope you continue soon.

Oh, and just a little something I'm confused by: the last sentence in the sixth-to-last paragraph is unfinished. ; Just thought you'd like to know, because it's quite vexing.

Other than that, I can't find anything major in the way of grammatical errors or plot holes, so very nicely done. And please do continue soon. I'm very curious to see where you take this.

It's been a while since you first publish this story and it's caught my interest. The first chapter is really good and interesting and I can't help but wonder how it will turn out. Keep up the good work.

Wow, i absolutely loved this story! Its a really creative idea, and you made the characters so...IC (In character)

I can't see any grammatical errors, nor any spelling errors.

Beautiful work!

Update this soon please!

WL,

Thymee

Wonderful. Love It. Can't Wait For Next Chapter. UPDATE SOON! GAMBATTE NE:D