Oh this was so sweet, and I absoloutely had to laugh when Edward interrupted! So much cuteness!

I love this. Read lots of Esme/Carlisle fics and this is definitely one of the best.

I love this piece. It's so beautiful. I love how Carlisle and Esme act around each other. You've captured them perfectly. Edward too. I also liked how they were telling the story. I loved Nessie's reaction and Edward's Tinkerbell comment. This story is definitely going on my favourites.
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Oh, superb. So, so magnific… Fantastic, I love it. So beautiful and sweet… I love it so much. Perfect. :D Won't you write more, please? :)

Sneak into her room! Carlisle...you were a bad, bad boy!

As Edward said, what happened that night is a different story. One I think you should write!

This is such a sweet story! And AWWWWWWWWWWWWW - they couldn't even kiss each other without Edward interupting. Kids! well, he's not a kid but close enough. This is a lovely story and I like how Carlisle was reflecting on it as a memory.

"Finally and in all his glorious, corniest mode" This was both super sweet and halarious! Everything from Edward about to throw the flower pot to Edward taking Carlisle's girl away. Please, please, please continue this!

Amazing words! So very romantic!

This is such a sweet, fluffy romance piece with the classic dance scene made so much more interesting by the mind-reading, piano-playing and eternally seventeen year old vampire chaperone.

What a great piece. It's absolutely beautiful and I can't tell you how many times I have read it.

It was so beautiful, but funny at the same time. I can totally imagine Edward being an annoying chaperone.

I looked up The Waltz of the Emperor after I read this and it set the whole tone, it's a beautiful piece.

Like always, amazing writing!

Can't wait to read more of you work!

~Alyssa

This was absolutely beautiful. Thanks for sharing :)

- Katie :)

Unbelievably sweet and corny! And that is meant as the highest praise!

Lovely - thank you!

Loved it! So funny and very cute.