This. Is. PERFECTION IN THE FAN FICTION UNIVERSE! I especially loved that line: Baptised in a world where fathers lie and sisters die, and daughters sing low and sweet over the body of a son. Pure genious!

This was absolutely beautiful. I adore it. The way you had her emotions nailed to a 'T'. Amazing, amazing job. (:

Wow. This was beautiful. :-)

Absolutely beautiful story! Very, very well written! Amazing job! :)

Oh wow! This is fantastic writing, you've done a brilliant job of getting inside her head. This is absolutely perfect.

Just hauntingly beautiful. Thank you for sharing it!

WOW...

Nice! Really good.

I'm always a huge fan of Zivacentric stories so I enjoyed this. I think you got her perfectly. Great job. x

This is on with the characterisation of well done.

Very elegant portrait of Ziva. I enjoyed it very much. Furthermore, I look forward to reading more of your work.

Thank you for posting it here for us to read.

Paul

(She wonders if one day Ducky will start a story with 'I once knew a girl from Israel…')

That killed me.

It's so good to have you back, and what a way to return. Absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking.

One of my most favorite things I've ever read. Achingly beautiful and hauntingly true and so utterly perfect.

Bravo and standing ovation!

very well done. wow - the emotions captured and the memories...the view from inside Ziva's head is not pretty but it is real. i love how she described the team. loved it, thanks!

Very interesting story. I do like it.

Just a word : "brisé" is for a man. For Ziva, it is "brisée" (I'm french...).

Another story soon ?

Absolutely loved it! Very realistic and well written :)