update soon! love the stories

Please update!

Update soon please!

can't wait to read more

For someone who's first languge is not english not bad love the story hope to read more

Please update the story soon!

IM SOOOOO SAD UPDATE AGAIN REALLY SOON

Please update the story real soon!

YES A NEW UPDATE AND THAT'S GOING TO BE SO COOL !

Wow! I am very impressed with your improvement compared to the previous chapter. Keep up the good work!

I didn't expect Misty to hitch a plan to get Divine by using Jack. Thank you for updating, I can't wait until the next chapter.

YES THE DRAMA HAS OFFICALLY BEGAN NOW UPDATE AGAIN PLEASE U ARE THE BEST !

Ah, the suspense is killing me. I been reading your story since you first published it and I really like it.
But I want to point out that it's quite difficult to read the third paragraph without losing your spot through that wall of text. If possible, can you space every time you make a new dialogue?

For example:
“Do you know how to dance?” Jacklyn suddenly asked since she never saw him danced before they walked in the gazebo.

“No,” Carlos replied. He turned to face Jacklyn as he lifted the hand holding Jacklyn’s, and placed his right hand to her shoulder blade, ”But I will try my best not to step on your feet.”

Jacklyn wanted to snort, but smiled instead. Typical Carlos, but that got her to like him more compared to the other guys that she met during her times in New Domino. Either they were way too amorous with her looks or they just wanted to beat her in a duel. Sure, Carlos was her fan but the way he saw differently in Jacklyn made her think he’s special.
(This is an excerpt of my fanfic story that I plan to publish soon.)

By spacing in between dialogue and ideas, it easier for people to read your story. Nevertheless, thank you for the update. I hope this review helps you to improve your writing.

SOO cute

poor Carly, hope the 2 make up in the next chapter.

I wonder how long will chapter 8 be made?