Fuck. Holey. Fuck. I'm not crying buckets! I just a tube of lotion in my eyes. This is so sad. Shit.

I do believe i'm going to cry. It's soo...sweet. I really hope you'll make a sequel or something of this, of what Ratatosk replies with. But I really, really like this.

*sob, sob* I can't believe it's finally over. All this wonderful reading, and it's complete at five chapters? WHHHHHHHHY!

You should totally make a sequel to this. Except this time make it so that Ratatosk finds a way to get back to Marta. It's not to say that I disliked the ending to this fic. Just that I would of rather had Ratatosk read her letters, rewrite the law to his convenience, and get himself (and Richter, if you wanted to) out of that realm to meet with Marta again. So...maybe something to think about? Hmm?

But I really liked this chapter. It shows that Marta is willing to let go, but still keep Ratatosk alive in her heart. And that last scene with Ratatosk smiling at her letter and telling himself that he'll always love her also was adorable. Again too bad they didn't get to reunite with one another.

But I'm a little confused. Where's Emil during all of this? And did Marta decide not to date Emil after all? Sorry, just curious about his whereabouts in the story.

But like always, great job on this fantastic fic. You did an awesome job with this. Please continue writing more RataMarta fics. You're soooo good at them.

I liked how you incorporated letters from the other characters. There letters were all nice and showed just how much they value Marta as their friend. Why can't I have friends like that?

*my bestie giving me a glare from the desk beside me* Um...I mean...what am I talking about? Heh heh heh...

Ahem. That's beside the point.

But poor Marta. She just keeps falling more and more into depression. Damn you, Ratatosk! You see what you caused? Huh? DO YA?

*flings backpack over shoulders* Well, I'm off. Time to get Ratatosk out of there and bring him back to Marta. See you in the next chapter review, KaylieAnn.

Seriously? You think this chapter sucked? Heh. Well that's where you're wrong. This chapter was just as good as the first two.

You really know how to bring out the essence behind the emotions of these themes. There definitely was a sense of urgency and want in Marta's letter. I felt so bad for Marta when she wrote, "If there's a way...any way, please tell me!" I could practically feel myself tear up a little.

And when she first mentioned Aric, I thought she was gonna say that she found someone she kind of liked. But then she said she didn't like him like that and my anger soon disappeared. Phew. But if that Aric does try to pursue Marta, so help me, I'll kill the man!

Anyways, great chapter like always. Now if you'll excuse me I have two more chapters of this to read. _

I loved this. It came out so wonderful. I've got tears in my eyes, it's so sad but it /works/ perfectly.

These last three chapters are great. You captured everything so well, especially the ending here.

It just... It works, it's perfect, it's sad but it's not all sad and it's... I don't really know what to say, it's just /good/.

Amazing...! I... wow, I don't even know what to say! This fic just made my day! Please keep on writing! I'll wait for the update!

These are really well-written, I really like this idea. It's nice. And it's a bit sad, too. Very nice job, though.

Well, first of all, let me just say that I'm LOVING this fic each time I read it over (...which was a lot). In fact, we're currently engaged. Yeah, that's right. I just got engaged to your fic. And since I'm proclaiming myself as an ordained minister, I also have the right to overthrow any objections towards my marriage to your fic. So I'd like to see you try and break us apart. Lol.

Sorry, that was off track.

Now where was I...? Oh, yeah. Just like the previous chapter, the wording of the letter flows perfectly. It matched perfectly with the theme 'anger'. Heh. Well, Ratatosk did say he liked her best when she was fiery. Wonder if he's bashing himself over the head for making that comment (granted that he's actually getting these letters). Lol. And the way Marta writes it like she knows how Ratatosk will react to certain sentences is cute.

But I feel so sad for Marta. She has to go through all this mental and emotional anguish over a guy she'll probably never see again. Just as we discussed before, it was a real shame that Ratatosk didn't get his happily ever after with Marta. Hopefully, Ratatosk gets her letters and writes her back. Or better yet, comes back to be with her. Eh...maybe that's asking for too much.

But pleeeease bring the two together! Ratatosk just has to come back. Sure, Emil's cute and all. But he's not Ratatosk! Plus, Emil can't love Marta like Ratatosk can.

So you better pull out some quick updates cuz I wanna know what happens next!

Til then, buh bye! \(0)/

Awww~

This chapter was cute, heartfelt, and just plain lovable all at once.

The fic definitely had a nice start. And at this point, where the amount of RataMarta fics is minuscule in quantity, I wouldn't worry too much about accuracy in the game's storyline. To me, the idea of Marta passing Ratatosk letters through the Otherworldly Gate sea is a possibility.

I like how you wrote the letter to fit her confusion over the matter. It really fits the mood and the writing is like how I'd picture Marta wording it.

And that "I love you" she added at the end was simply adorable. *heart, heart*

Keep up the good work.

Why the hell doesn't this have any reviews? This is an amazing story! Marta's letters are so heartfelt, it brought a tear to my eye. I'm really happy about the Ratatosk/Marta ship being mentioned here, it doesn't get enough attention.

Please continue writing this wonderful story!