This is very good for a frist fanfic or just a fanfic in general.

that is soooo sad:( but this is realy good:D update!

Hey, I liked that! It's more a prologue right now, but I'd love to read more of her story. I was in that show last summer... how I miss it. :) And thanks so much for the review on my story. I've had it up forever, and 1st reviewer. Yay!

First I would like to say thanks for the review. I love when people give me their opinion on things especially my writings.

Second your fanfic was a great start, I don't know if its just the beginning or if this is it but its still great.

Please if you have time try and read some of my other fanfics, their not all Aida though, mostly anime like bleach and Shugo Chara. Oh and I'm like you I like to make my own characters too!

This was good! It was well written, and though short, sometimes that's all you need. Yours is the first story I've read for Aida, unfortunately it doesn't seem like there are many out there. Good job!