nice story :D

Good story, thank you )

So damn cute :) Loved it! :D

AWWW! So incredibly sweet! You should write a sequel. Bravo my dear.

Ugh, I hate dreams like that. The frozen/slow motion feeling? God those are awful to experience. So yeah, I think the dream sequence went quite well. I've also had that kiss someone and a moment later freak out and run thing happen. Not fun! LOL. Great work. On to the final chapter!

Very sweet story so far. I really hope Derek is happy when he finds out. Lord knows I would be! :D

Very cute scenario. Looking forward to seeing what you do with it. :)On to chapter two!

Aww! So sweet, I want more ) Great story from the begining to the end. Hope to read more from you soon.

Dramatic, emotional, amazing. Cant wait to read on :D

yay? i hope this is going where i think it's going.

thank you for the post, and i can't wait to see what else pops out of your head.

Great chapter! Can't wait for more )

Oh my god! you can't leave it at a cliff hanger! that's just mean! can't wait until the next up-date! i use exclamation points a lot...!

u evil person! how could you stop this wonderful story! please update!

My favorite so far too but it ended too soon. I need more.

Awesome :D I sincerely hope you continue! :D