Reviews for The Dance
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 6/23
J'aime bien.
Ne'ith5 chapter 1 . 7/25/2017
Lovely! This is the ending the story demanded! Thanks for writing and sharing.
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
he's got such a good heart underneath that con-exterior...

gotta love neal! and peter for going along to the dance
ferryboat George chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
oh, that was so sweet. I loved it.
Leighta Greenleaf chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Awwww! Cuteness!
Morange chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
I watched this episode with my mum and when she pointed out the Diahann Carroll ( the actress who plays June) is really a singer/dancer from the old days it just put a completely different spin on the Episode that you're managed to catch.

Just the perfect touch to add to the episode. Neal is gradually changing and he can see the differences between him and Ford.
SK Musings chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Bravo! Beautiful story ... the exact ending I would have hoped for from a die hard romantic like Neal. You described his inner conflict so perfectly. The resolution keeps Neal and all the characters genuine. Absolutely loved it!
MaraudingSnitch1314 chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Very well done! Neal battling with himself, the lovely dance, and June and Peter reflecting on Neal - all of it was wonderfully spot-on and in-character. Great work! :)
Writer's-BlockDP chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
You most certainly weren't the only one tearing up at the end. This was an absolutely perfect tag; I'm going to have to reread it every time I rewatch the episode. Fantastic job!
costley51 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Awww, I love it. And I think you keep a good balance of Neal wondering what side he'll end up on.
twilightmecrazii chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Loved it that was so sweet amazing
mam711 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Lovely. You're prolific and good - a rare combination.

I really liked Neal musing about how he reacted to Ford, and how he would have reacted in the past, and being careful to not go around Peter's back so soon. And the entire night out was lovely.
Harm Marie chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Absolutely loved this.
Tinnuial chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
I cannot thank you enough for writing this. It's the ending I would have loved to see at the end of that episode and it's going straight to my favourites! I really hope they give June more screen time next season. Thanks again!
georgiamomma123 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Really awesome story! This would have been so cute to have been in Tuesdays episode! I liked the episode, but I guess like you, felt that part lacked 'something', but was good. This SO would have filled the bill! I love it! Too bad it can't be submitted as a suggestion! Maybe for the future though!
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