I honestly loved this story, it's brilliantly written, you captured all the characters incredibly well and developed them even further. The slap was surprising and genius, it was totally believable and the aftermath was as well. Olivia is a brilliantly flawed yet strong character. You set up an amazing foundation if you decide to continue the story. Explore Olivia's devotion to Bruce and its limit, Bruce's love for Olivia, Rachel's influence especially considering TDKR. God just a great fic kudos

Please continue with The Dark Knight.

I'm sorry, but you completely lost me during this last chapter. He hit her, then he kissed Rachel and all the while Olivia's acting like none of it happened. I really don't get it!

This is an amazing fic, please tell me there is a sequel.

awesome :D i hope u update! :D

You made Bruce seem like a prick, and her like a marysue. Your characterization of Bruce is shit.

ONLY ONE MORE CHAPTER? How can there only be one more chapter? This story is awesome and well written and the characters have more depth to them, unlike most of the stories on this site. It really is good. Please tell me that you are going to do The Dark Knight with Olivia! I love her character!

amazing! can't believe he would hit her, she shouldn't let him get away with that easily! update soon!

Wow! This is one of my favorite stories on here! I love Olivia and her will power to try and keep everything together for Bruce. She loves him so much despite everything! I am very shocked that he hit her but he lost control of himself and everything. I cannot wait to see what happens next! Please update soon! Loving everything about this! Kind of sad that the next chapter is the last one :(

I like this chapter. Seems like Rachael is going to be a competition for a while for Olivia. Olivia has to stay with Bruce because he needs someone by his side.

I want to see how Bruce shows his love for Olivia and really want her by his side after 7 years of missing as well as Olivia.

poor Olivia always worrying about Bruce!:(

Wow.

Please don't keep me hanging! I hope that she stays with Bruce! thank you for updating! And I like the choice of Olivia's assistant's name!

Please, please, please update soon! Your story is amazing and I love it! [can you tell?] Thanks for being awesome!

yay! finally an update! I loved the chapter! please update soon!

My gosh this story is so amazing and wonderfully written! I have missed it! I really do feel Olivia's pain! Please update soon!