OH NO. CLIFFHANGER. D:

Please continue this! I'm loving the comedy, action, and mystery behind it all, plus the fact that it's a story out of a story - awwww, and I really really REALLY want things to work out between all of them and...

I just love how you mix in the different modes of writing (comedy, action, etc.) PLUS getting the personalities right! This is one of the nicest fics I've read in a while, and it's quite saddening if it won't get finished. :(

I'm hoping you'll continue this soon! I'll be waiting

That's it,I need more
I want to see Roddy and Gil's relationship,I wanna see the pls. continue

What a cruel place to leave it off! I just found your story and love it. I hope you do continue. Take care and best of luck with the rest of the story.

OH MAIN GOTT THE STORYS SO...AWESOME! No but really I cant wait till you cantinue it Ive been reading it for three hours strait! Love it _

Please update this soon! It was getting so good. I'm really getting into it! I MUST know what happens next! T.T So please update because this is AMAZEBALLS!

I love this story! It's sexy, funny, and suspenseful all at the same time. I really can't wait to see the next chapter. I hope you update soon~

... WTH... this story is crazy... DarkFemPirate Spain, mob boss Romano...Gil is starting to look bad as well... and is Mattie okay? And Canada and Turkey.. totally never wold have thought of them... Hahah Al married Ivan, what about Arty? And poor Francis don't get anyone :( Update soon por favore

what? nooo don't end it their next chapter please! oh and i finle read this story yay _ (i saw it a few time but was always a bit scetey about reading it casue i feel some side pairing my ruen the whole story for me) so yeah despite how odd it is i like it i mean trukey/canada who would have thought. and russia and america well it alright though i perfer my fav pairing it guess it a lot better the england and america though so FrUK would be funny and what going to happen next and i know mattie is bleed but nothing bad going to happen to him right? and female spain needs to be stop prussia and austria need to get all problems fix and then beat the shit out of femalespain cause she kind of being a bi#*h ... are you going to kill her off cause i don't think she'll leave them alone if she left alive, kind of like a staker you know. anyway i can't wait till the next chapter and i'm sorry if i ofned you in anyway cause i didn't mean it. and thank you for not erasing this review and keep on writing _

Nooooo~ What's gonna happen next? You gott write more as quickly as possible!

I love this story. It's so awesome and I'm sure even Prussia would think it to be awesome!

Also... Did Austria and Prussia just reak up? Th-They're gonna get back together... Right?

... if they don't I will still love this story but I will also be sad...

More please~

I can't wait till the next chapter~~~~~! _

haha gilbert's really good at double negatives or...um...just plain confusing declarations of love XD had to read that part twice to understand it :)) but still the humour at the end was well done :D i hope to see more funny scenes in future chapters~! and lol your author's note was so funny XD stroke of genius :))

Hungary/Ukraine? Interesting choice of crack pairing…

Also, small correction on the Spanish: If you're trying to say "I love you," it's "te quiero," not "te querido" or "ti quiero" or whatever other strange combination. Verb choice is good, though. .

I. Love. This. Story. It's so adorable!

wow...what a revelation XD i was suddenly surprised by the situation between Anita and Gilbert (and for some reason Anita was spelled Antonia in previous chapters...) i thought he hated her or something...since at the start he wanted to cut off her head :)) (i went back to the beginning to make sure that they were countries since i temporarily forgot and i ended up reading those scenes carefully XP) hope the next chapter comes out soon~! :D

this chapter is really cute, i love the interaction between these two because you always made them super funny! but i like this story more than your other one now, because you didn't make Liz horrible. (at least in my head Anita is not Spain).