How have I never read your writing before? :3 It's sweet without being cheesy, and fun while still staying in-character and feeling true to the original material. Just my style, I love it. :)

This was so cute! :D

so cute!

This is really seriously adorable. Short, but very sweet and to the point. I love it. Great work.

SO cute!

too cute.

This is so incredibly adorable. I especially liked that line at the end - "Let's get you cleaned up, little panda." Icing to the cake, a perfect ending to this little ficlet :) Kudos on a job well done :)

A very cute and enjoyable story to read. Well done!

That is too cute! Cloud is so wonderfully awkward with kids, especially Marlene. And Marlene looking like a baby panda... Too cute! I can't believe it took me this long to finally read this.

You said you got this from mishearing a line in ACC? I think I know the one...when Cloud's says "It's my turn" or something in Japanese, and it sounds kinda like panda? :3

This one is cute and makes me smile. :D

hahahahaha xDDD poor marlene! x3

New fave! I'm surprised he didn't think of bullies as a possible reason why she was covered in mud, but the simplicity of her emergency and the joy of his being able to get her out of it- thus creating a memory with her- was touching.

An absolutely adorable story very nice job.

I smiled and said awwwwwww. It is so cute!