| Reviews for Valerie's Revenge |
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  Izane Sunstrider chapter 4 . 7/14/2013 Oh, as soon as I saw the chapter name, I KNEW something was up. Oh come on, not the tears again! Um, I mean sweat! Heh heh. YOU READ NOTHING OF THIS REVIEW EXCEPT FOR THE FOLLOWING WORDS: I love your story, keep it up! *sniff* um, allergies? Heh heh. :):):):):):) |
| Izane Sunstrider chapter 3 . 7/14/2013 Oh, wow! Ugh, don't cry, Izane. Don't do it; it's just a story. A really awesome story that's making it hard to see through the tears. Not that I'm actually crying- heh heh. I'm, uh, sweating through my eyes. Yeah, that's believable enough. OH MY GOSH, THIS STORY IS AWESOME! SO MANY FEELS! Oh no. Shoot. I'm not supposed to like romantic stuffsters. Your an evil (yet good) author. Keep on writing, this is amazing! :):):):):):) |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/19/2012 wow... |
 sulfur angel chapter 7 . 6/28/2011 You say that smileys give you power. But power corrupts. And corruption is a crime. And crime doesn't pay. ... ... SO IF GET TOO MANY SMILEYS, YOU'LL GO BROKE! ... ... I can only hope that this message reaches you in time. |
| YourFavoriteCONTRACTOR chapter 12 . 6/28/2011 Nice. Somewhat confusing sometimes, but over all I thought it was good. |
| Ry22 chapter 11 . 6/22/2011 :) |
| D3athrav3n92 chapter 1 . 5/23/2011 To be honest, I think that it's stupid that you write for reviews. It's just the same thing as trying to get attention. You should write because you enjoy it, because it makes you happy to see other people enjoying your work. And I'm not trying to say this to be mean, either. I'm saying it because it makes me disappointed to see people (virtually) holding their stories hostage just to grab attention. If you have such a good idea, then expand on it! Don't care what other people think of it! Just write and have fun with it! Reviews are nice (for the most part), but they were put in place to give writers advice. If people don't like your work, so be it, and if people do, then good for you. Just don't be too wrapped up as you try and win attention. Your story idea's good-I always like the idea of a tortured and abused Danny (only for him to get lots of lovin' for it ;). However, I feel as if the chapters are way too short, and with the HUGE list (it's like you're bragging, really) of reviewers, it makes the chapters seem even shorter and shorter. But you capture emotions well, and that's what I really appreciate. Sorry about the super-huge-long review. I swear I wasn't meaning to make it this long. Anyways, keep writing! -D3athrav3n92 |
| kirara the great chapter 10 . 5/8/2011 is there a sequal |
| Yaythe1st chapter 11 . 5/8/2011 The squel sounds awesome :) Ummm... If there a Yaythe2nd, I don't know about :P Yay xxx |
| book phan44 chapter 11 . 5/1/2011 XD |
| book phan44 chapter 7 . 5/1/2011 D |
| book phan44 chapter 5 . 5/1/2011 :) |
| CatchingWind chapter 11 . 4/4/2011 smileys all around! *throws millions of smileys in the air and we dance around in them while laughing like hyper kids* i am hyper! *goes ghost and does loopdeloops and stuff* |
| BooksAreMyVideogames chapter 11 . 3/26/2011 :) :) AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME! :) :) |
| 2Belle26 chapter 11 . 3/24/2011 Great story! Sequel soon please! MORE SMILEYS! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D |
