these three little ones are great, wish there was more ;)

Aww poor Dean at least he has Sam to help him

I really think we need to see how this happened. I just need more...love this!

I really think we need to see how this happened. I just need more...love this!

Heh! I think I like the last one best but I'm not sure. Hard to beat some badly beaten up Dean and laconic caring Sam. :D

THIS.

This KILLED me.

How awesome can you be?

*is in love*

No more words, I'm speechless...

Those breathing exercises suck! The hospital brings in that stupid little machine and you have make the ball go so high or suck it until you think you're going to die with someone standing there cheering you on. :( Don't blame Dean for being a little bit uncooperative. Poor guy.

I know it has to happen to prevent pneumonia, but sheesh. Sammy's such a good little brother. :D

Nicely done. Brought back some yucky memories, tho. :(

Great job. Those were all good. I loved how all the talk was simple and to the point. People really do act like that when they're hurt, haha.

Awesome writing, I enjoyed it. :D

Heehee - no Dean doesn't get a vote because he never knows what's good for him.

Poor Sammy, he must have the patience of God!

.lots xx

I love the bantering. You were really able to capture so much with each statement from the boys.

A chaptered drabble, how fun. I was glad to read more after the first hundred words were up. I really liked how all the dialog flowed. :)

The last couple of lines especially made me smile!

Bev x

THREE times the awesome! I ADORE this dialogue - it is so totally easy (and wonderful) to imagine this entire scene... lovely, hurt!Dean... just yum... you've captured them perfectly here.

Erf. LOVE this! "Jagged pain wakes him." Good gods, what an awesome way to open it, feels like crushed glass in my gut after "Dean has busted some ribs."

"But, you're unconscious. Your vote counts less." That. Yeah. *stupid grin*

"Wake up." "Huh-uh." LOL Then the knuckles to the sternum. Ouch!

LOVE Sam making him breathe, I could see it in my head. And poor Dean's "Hurts." just twist my heart until it bleeds. Haggling on how many breaths. I could so see them doing that.

Repeated "Hate." made me laugh hard, I could hear him in my head, wanting to say I hate you but not having breath or strength to say the whole thing. And then the "Wha'kinda girl..." "I'll be gentle..." was just absolutely perfect.

Yes yes I know I just quoted half your drabble back to you, but love it! Love it! Love it!

That was a long and interesting tale of the two-some