Reviews for Darkened Light
Freddie Rindklip chapter 1 . 2/18
My guess is that English is not your first language. Despite that the story is well written - even if this is not my first time reading it.
bigwoof chapter 8 . 1/21
Excellent story! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter...
Freddie Rindklip chapter 7 . 11/19/2019
Really interesting. Unfortunately since it was released in 2011 your muse is likely gone. Thank you for keeping us entertained.
ORKCHILD chapter 8 . 10/7/2019
glad to see a new chapter.
subzeus chapter 1 . 9/23/2019
Sorry, I cant spend time reading this. You are missing about a thousand commas and periods scattered throughout just the first chapter. Impossible to read I'm afraid.
Bubblezmith chapter 8 . 9/22/2019
Would love to see this revised and added to. Extremely bad grammar aside, I thoroughly enjoy it. Decent job.
steve.moore.9081323 chapter 8 . 8/18/2019
Please please more
Please let there be more
god of all chapter 8 . 8/3/2019
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
creativesm75 chapter 8 . 7/24/2019
nice
foxee-chik chapter 8 . 7/16/2019
wow! keep goin! i liked it! i cant w8 2 read the nxt chap!
stylo1 chapter 3 . 7/2/2019
just about everything gets explained as; coincidence, luck, bad luck. there is hardly any thought put into it. and for a rewrite i can only imagine the horror it was before, the gramma is just that bad
Linda chapter 8 . 6/23/2019
Very different don't like what happened to Rose, but a good story.
tyrannicpuppy chapter 2 . 6/20/2019
An interesting change of circumstance. I'm keen to see where this one is headed. Looks to be a world of fun for some, and agony for others.
Sammy-Jay Potter chapter 8 . 6/20/2019
Enjoying this story immensely
BillBrink chapter 8 . 6/19/2019
Don't let the grammar Nazis get to you. This is an enjoyable and unique story. I like your premise and look forward to seeing you complete it. Thanks for sharing it.
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