| Reviews for Delicate |
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   Unseen Watcher chapter 1 . 9/12/2019 Nice take on the possible scenario. Very well done Yuugi. |
| Kismetica chapter 1 . 3/28/2017 A very nice story. It makes for a realisitc, deeper start towards their relationship, and I've enjoyed reading how these two managed to sort out this conflict. I also like how it is focused on the 'Season 0' version of Yami, along with Yugi's feelings on his punishment game. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2016 This was a very good story, and we'll written too. |
| Moonlight Serenity chapter 1 . 9/14/2012 Oooh, early Yami always intimidates me. Yugi's so brave. I really like your take on this early relationship. This was really well-written and thoughtful. |
| TheEagerScribbler chapter 1 . 8/1/2012 This is very good-I think you did an exellent job at capturing the manga...if that made any sense. |
| AkuZeku chapter 1 . 6/27/2012 Well that was something else. I really enjoyed reading this story, because somehow the whole time I really never knew how it would go on, what would happen, what would be the intention of it. And it turned out to be just a great intention. I also loved your objective writing style, like from above, as if we haven't been already knowing about Yugi and his grandfather and the spirit of the puzzle. Sooo ... great oneshot! :) |
| Sour Schuyler chapter 1 . 3/11/2012 Really well written! Your word choice is amazing. |
| Lippo chapter 1 . 1/27/2012 Great! |
| Dashusi4ka chapter 1 . 1/4/2012 very realistic.. somehow it shows that it was not just flowers, rainbows and angels' flutes between yami and yuugi |
| Taylor S chapter 1 . 9/26/2011 Great story! Loved it :) |
| White Sulfur chapter 1 . 8/24/2011 AAHH! I love your writing style! The dialogue, the pacing, the characters, the atmosphere... everything. I adored every moment of reading this! Brilliant oneshot. Kudos to you! :) |
| veituriel chapter 1 . 7/31/2011 THAT WAS SEASON ZERO AWESOMENESS! domo arigato gosaimossu! -Darker |
| shmeepeh chapter 1 . 7/6/2011 This was incredibly well done. Perfect characterization and an interesting scenario. I'll have to check out more of your stuff. :) |
| Francis chapter 1 . 5/13/2011 So glad this wasn't overdone on the romance, it would've been ruined. Great story as it is. |
| eBooeBoo chapter 1 . 4/12/2011 Oh dear, I was hoping to read more :( I finished this so fast I didn't even realize I had reached the end. You have a lovely story here, with everyone so humanized and filled with emotions that humans would truly feel. I know I'm repeating myself, but humanized to me is 'to be kind and gentle,' like how Yami became and Yuugi always was. But at the same time they experienced the not-so-nice emotions, like fear, mistrust, coldness, etc. You have a great grasp on writing! I hope I can learn more from you in the art of writing :) |
