I was looking for this fic for a while and finally found it again! It was as sad and beautiful as I remembered ;-; Poor Missile! Poor everyone in that timeline!

Honestly tearing up. Man, that was such an emotionally powerful game.

That was so sad! I never thought I'd feel so sad about a Pomeranian until I read this story.

MY POOR HEART
IT'S CRYING
MISSILE...
I always knew that he tried for a long time to save Kamila, but I never imagined that he'd try a hundred and one times... That just broke me down... You really enjoy messing with my feelings, don't you?

(who am I kidding that's like every good fanfiction author ever)

This story really touched me... I really feel the sadness of Missile. It's horrible but beautiful at the same time to see all the love he has for his mistress when he sees her, again and again.

So, thank you for this wonderful story, I really liked !

I really liked this story. Your characterization of Missile was very well done, and it was very sweet and sad. It really showed how loyal Missile was to Kamila and Lynne. Great job!

Keep-a-writing!

M-my heart. Missile is just the sweetest dog. If I ever had a dog like that, I'd like them a lot more. This sort of reminds me of the story about the tiger-striped cat; it's just so sad and hopeless feeling.

That was so sad! It made me tear up a bit.

You did a really great job portraying Missile's feelings and this was just amazing.

Keep writing!

Again, I apologize for not leaving a review the first time. But I hope you didn't misunderstand it because I really liked this story!

That was most touching story. Endless repeating of loved one dying... I'm moved by how Missile struggle to save Kamila and feeling hard to leave even after he knows he can't help. Missile, you did your best!

Hello!

This one-shot is amazing! I am a major fan of angst and tragedy so this was a bonus for me XD

I've started playing Ghost Trick recently and so far, I love the relationship between Missle and Kamila :) It is super sweet and full of love! I greatly admire how much Missle cares for his mistress and you displayed that fantastically in this story!

The story of Ghost Trick is tragic and you have definitely put in such key elements in your story. The way Missle's character develops throughout the moments displayed during the numerous four-minute-rewinds does touch in with the sadder part of the game and still manages to show the utter devotion Missle has towards his mistress!

In the end, Missle is somewhat able to convince/teach himself that if he wants to save Kamila, he has to leave her. He alone is not enough. But even the thought of parting from her dead body is absurd to Missle so he stays with her. However, he learns that if he wants to see her alive again, he'd have to leave her side, even if just for a little while...

And that is one of the main reasons this story is beautiful :) I enjoyed it very much and I thank you for your hard work and dedication in making this :)

Keep up the excellent work and more power to you and your stories!

Sincerely, O_o

The formatting makes it look a little confusing (maybe you could put some bits in italics or bold font to emphasise certain parts), but I liked the concept and the fanfic was pretty good and in character. Thanks for writing _

Just splendid. This story captures Missile's feelings perfectly.

How he felt at that time was written so well.

His never-ending efforts to save Kamila...

His sadness and guilt for not able to save her...

It made me almost cry.

Missile is indeed the 'True Hero' in the game.

His loyalty matched Hachiko's, to wait 10 years for a slim real chance to save his two mistress: Sissel.

He must've practiced over and over on the how he would act later when donning the name 'Ray' for 10 years.

This fic is an undeniable proof of out little Pomeranian Hero.

Love this fic! You're awesome! XD

O-oh my god. This is the saddest thing. THE SADDEST THING. He's such a hopeful, innocent dog and this is just crushing him.

Wow, this was absolutely fantastic! There’s so much to love in this one-shot that I’m not even sure where to begin. First of all, I really like the way you structured this. You never outright stated what’s going on in the fic, but you gave the reader all the necessary details to put together what’s going on the fic. When I read the first few paragraphs, I was at first a bit confused about what was going on, but then it became perfectly clear. It’s always such a satisfying feeling when a story makes you figure something out on your own.

Secondly, I just adore the way you wrote Missile. His loyalty to Kamila was wonderfully portrayed. I can’t imagine that being an easy job since Missile is such a simple character and yet so complex in his own ways.

Thirdly, Missile’s progress through all the different feelings was a brilliant angle for the story. It was just heart-breaking to see how he was at first happy that Kamila was still alive and how he went through so much pain when he watched the scene again and again. I felt that in order to get the most out of the fic, it was necessary to read it several times just to appreciate the intensity of the emotions better. The part that perhaps touched me the most was the eleventh time when he was hoping for a miracle that never came.

Thank you for writing this story. It’s one of the saddest pieces I’ve read in a long time.

TT I LOVE THIS! It makes me tear up to see how faithful and loving Missile is. Awesome job. Short and sweet. Love it!