I love this story! The writing is excellent. I didn't think the description of the pregnancy and birth were too much, but to each his own. It's one of my favorite LM stories.

This, in my opinion, has to be the one of the best Lizzie McGuire fanfics written so far! There is so much emotion; no fake crap like Lizzie getting pregnant, Gordo getting amnesia or Miranda having the hots for Sam. I have no idea about what people see Lizzie McGuire as. It is a show about an insecure teenager. Period.

I love your style of writing. There is so much emotion; I love it. I also love the fact that I can see this episode while I read. Your choice of words make the story what it is. All the characters dialogues and movements compared to the ones in the actual TV show. I just thought Matt was a wee bit off, but other than that, it was perfect.

I liked how you brought up DownSyndrome. You didn't describe it as some horrible disease. And I was so relieved when Hannah missed it slightly. The way Jo broke down when she saw Sofia in the machine was perfectly sad. You portrayed her to be the protective, wonderful mother she is.

The best part of this was that JO was pregnant. Not Lizzie and not Miranda. I hate the horrible fanfics about that. Yes, FanFiction is there to express your feelings but that goes too far. It encourages teen pregnancy the way Gordo and Lizzie flirt and rent hotel rooms and stupid things like that. I hate it and I'm so glad you know how to write a proper fanfic.

The emotions were great of course. But the describing of the pregnancy and going into labor is a little too much, don't you think? The way she screams "Ooh it burns!" and Hannah had to be turned over. That is a little deep for children who read this. But otherwise it has a lot of an emotion.

This is a sweet story.

Awesome story so far!

I love your writing style. It's so good. :)

Hope you write more great stories.

That was excellent! Glad to see an update!

Please continue.

I must say, this story was AMAZING! Loved loved loved it! Keep writing!

Awww. Keep it up.

Whoops! I reversed the babies' names. Will fix that in the next chapter. Sorry!

Good chapter. Lemme guess, you got the idea for Lizzie's extra credit assignment from the news story about that high school chick who did a social experiment paper where she faked a pregnancy for six months? If so, brilliant! I liked this chapter. Nice, touching moments, mixed with some good humor. I also loved Matt's bonding with each sister and that he wasn't too disappointed with sister. Showed he's growing up. Keep it up!

Keep it coming.

YAY! Another update! I love this chapter! I had to giggle about Lizzie and her extra credit assignment. Too funny. I like the whole chapter. So sorry you're moving. I can't wait for more!

Oooh! So the drama! I like the names! Can't wait for more.

Yes, I know this chapter is short. The chapter just naturally ended there. I'll write one or two more chapters and I've got some ideas for the story that I think you'll like.