Loved it, keep writing!

Great addition as always:)

Amazing writing as always xx

Flack going through withdrawl - very funny topic to work/write with.

It's nice to read about Angell being so vulnerable and open with Flack about her fear, 'cause we're so used to her being tough ass all the time.

Oh yeah, someone whould shoot Flack if he was ever stupid enough to leave or hurt Angell. Angell could shoot him, her father could shoot him, one of her brothers could shoot him, one of us FF readers could shoot him, the list goes on and on.

Major withdrawal symptoms. I can't blame Jess though cause even on air Don Flack is addicting. LOL:D

Fave moments:

"I've been hurt once." Jess repeated. "I don't know how I felt about Philip, but it already pales in comparison with how I feel about you. This has the potential to hurt me so badly that …"

Don cut her off, kissing her hard. "If I ever," he said in a low voice, pulling away, "hurt you in any way, I want you to shoot me. I know you said you were over it when you first told me about that bastard, but I saw pain in your eyes anyway and I never, ever want to be the cause of that."

Jess smiled weakly. "Shooting you would be the least of your problems."

"I know." Don told her. "Believe me, I know. I just need you to know that I …"

"I know." Jess assured him. "I never said it was a rational fear."

Don is so sweet. But even then I'd shoot him if this were real for hurting my fave character!

Because he knew that the day she walked into his life, she turned his life around. Without her, he knew, his recovery would have been hampered by his own pride, pushing away all those who tried to help him.

But Jess had propped him up and supported him, all somehow without him realising that she was doing so, for which he was grateful, since he had no doubt that he would have tried to push her away if he had.

Jess pulled away, dropping another brief kiss on his lips as she did. "What are you thinking, Detective?"

"What makes you think I'm thinking anything?" Don teased.

Jess raised an eyebrow. "Because even before we were dating, if you were thinking hard about something, you'd draw patterns on my shirt. Back then it was just a hug though. It's always the same pattern though." She demonstrated by tracing figure eights on his chest. "I told you mine; you tell me yours."

And this is why Jess is an awesome detective cause she notices things. Great work and update soon!

Ah, pure bliss! I adore how we are seeing them talk to each other about their day, I know we get that a lot but it still is great to see. Cases involving kids are the worse, but this one was dark. To imagine being so desperate to cut that baby out...*shudders* but at least he is safe with his grandparents. :)

I don't want to dismiss Jess's fears of losing Don, it is very real since the job they both do is very dangerous. But I know now that they are together he will be a lot more cautious. As for losing him emotionally, he is too in love with her to let that every happen. They both are. :)

Favorite lines

"My biggest fear is losing you."

Don's smile faded into a more serious expression. "I'm not going anywhere, sweetheart. I know our job's dangerous but …"

"I'm not scared of losing you to the job." Jess cut him off. "Although, yeah, that does scare me. What really scares me is just the thought of losing you altogether."

"I'm not going anywhere." Don repeated, kissing her softly. "Why does that scare you so much?"

"It'll sound stupid." Jess warned.

"Try me." Don challenged. "Talk it out, Detective, or this is gonna eat you."

Jess took a shaky breath. "I've been hurt once." She held up a hand, anticipating his protest before he'd even opened his mouth. "Let me finish."

Don nodded with a sigh.

"I've been hurt once." Jess repeated. "I don't know how I felt about Philip, but it already pales in comparison with how I feel about you. This has the potential to hurt me so badly that …"

Don cut her off, kissing her hard. "If I ever," he said in a low voice, pulling away, "hurt you in any way, I want you to shoot me. I know you said you were over it when you first told me about that bastard, but I saw pain in your eyes anyway and I never, ever want to be the cause of that."

Jess smiled weakly. "Shooting you would be the least of your problems."

"It's not irrational, Jess." Don whispered. "That bastard broke your heart, Jess; it makes sense that you'd be wary about giving it away again." He tugged on her waist so she settled beside him, her legs still lying over his, and tucked her head under his chin, kissing her forehead as he did. "Difference is, Jess, I know how damn lucky this makes me."

"No." Jess disagreed. "That's not …"

"It is, Jess." Don insisted. "Even with the slight addiction that comes with it."

Jess laughed. "No, Don. I know better than to try and argue with you on that point, even if I do think you're exaggerating. What I was going to say was: That's not the only difference between you and I'm grateful for that." She smiled up at him. "Now can we change the subject?"

"With pleasure." Don grinned. "To what?"

Jess smirked. "Well, Detective, I do believe we were in the middle of fixing those withdrawal symptoms."

"So we were." Don murmured, his hand sliding into her hair again. He brushed his lips against hers once, twice, until she let out an impatient groan and he pulled her into a deep kiss, smirking against her skin as he gave in to her wishes, not that he was ever really going to try to resist her.

Not anymore."

I know that Jess has had her share of creeps *coughs*Philip*coughs*, but has Don ever had his heart broken? And do you think that could be the reason why he picked Devon?

Sweet sweet sweet :). Great job Titans!

Aww, poor Jess, bein' hurt like that. Don's good for her though. She won't be hurt like that ever again. And the withdrawl was really cute.

You write them so perfect 3

Awesome job :)