I think your portrayal of them all are amazing, although a little less so on Tia and Rocket. I don't know, it's just a bit difficult to imagine how Rocket would be after Netherball and how Tia would coop with it.

Oh, and I looove your Sinedd. Complete bastard, casanova, arrogant yet oddly amusing to read and very intriguing as he remains indifferent, and a real tease. I love it.

Nice chapters so far. The way you depict Mei and the others is good :)
So sad you did not continue the story. It was starting to get interesting :D

Wow, I thought I reviewed this! Well, this is great so far, don't worry about your characterisation of Mei, D'Jok and Sinedd, it's really well-done. I can't wait to see where you'll go with this story.

Aww I really enjoyed that :)

I'd love to see you write a hard core mei/d'jok story xxx

Oops. Did I infect you with the RocketxMei bug? I'm sorry! XD But i'd love to see your intepretation of that couple! (it'd be far better than my measly writings anyway) so there's your prompt! Write a RocketxMei Drabble :)

I really like this, indecisive, I honestly do. It feels like, with this story, you've recaptured the essence of the older fics which used to be the theme around this fandom, but obviously you've added your own flare to it.

As for characterisations, as this is a darker fic, OOCness is to be expected (though I don't really count it as OOC. it's just your intepretation of how certain characters behave when placed in different situations). The only one I felt was slightly off was D'jok, but then again he was in a formal setting and was wanting to play up to the cameras, so no biggie.

Mei, I feel, is perfect and you've captured the squeaky clean couple image she and D'jok often tried to portray.

I adore your Sinedd. You know I do. Cheeky, devious Sinedd who is ever so inappropiate when it comes to Mei, or, indeed, Rocket and Tia.

I like this, and I like where it's going. please continue soon as this feels like a fic you can really get your teeth into. Yum.

Yay! New chapter! And things do happen, I feel that everything is right for the characters, I don't know why you're nervous, your characterisation is nearly always flawless. I love the extended dog simile at the end, it really suits the situation.

And this "If she was going to give them a show, let it be a good show." is so Mei!

"D'Jok, blushing is a no-no for gingers, I should know," - made me laugh...it also explains why my brother seems to be immune to embarrassment.

And there was really no need to thank me, I completely understand what a pain stories can be sometimes, I'm still working on that Artegor/Sinedd thing I mentioned a while ago and it's just not coming along as easily as I would like.

This is a super cool story! I really enjoyed reading this, you write the Tia/Rocket pairing so alive and interesting. I would love to see your take on Sinedd and Mei in this fic. Please continue!

Wow. Just wow, this was the best story I've read in AGES. Your writing is just such a pleasure to read: it's intelligent and observant without using too much words. And the idea i so original, finally something new! Not that I mind Rocket/Tia fanfictions, but it's so awesome that you managed to also add Mei into the story as a somewhat main character.

And all the GF characters you're written so far are portrayed so well. Very often when I read stories about, for example, Aarch/Artegor or Thran/Ahito I can feel which character the author hates the most- because those characters are portrayed as boring-annoying cliches. And since it usually happens Mei, Sinedd or D'jok, my fav characters, it's very discouraging to continue reading the story ;_;

But not with you! With every sentence I was thinking 'omgomgmogwhatnext?'

I beg you, please continue the story. This is the original, interesting story I've been waiting for. Also Mei deserves a good story explaining what happened with her and Sinedd before season 3. And your the master of analyzing and writing complicated relationships (I mean it, tonight after reading this story I've read almost all your stories and you made Tia/Rocket look even more epic) 3

So please, if you have time and will, please continue this epic fanfiction :)

I like your story, the characters are like real!

Please continue!

God this was good. I felt like Mei; like I was really there, seeing Rocket and Tia interact...phew.

Ooooh my god. I fukken love this piece. Fantastic, really with every sentence I grew more and more excited.

The idea of showing what happened with the two couples after season 2 is genius.

There's no need to say that your portrayal of Tia/Rocket is pure awesome (as in your every fic, you're the master :)), but Mei... oh boy, I loved her in your fic. And also Sinedd in your other genius piece (the one about skipping rocks) was perfect too (I'm i huge Sinedd/Mei fan ')

Please do continue, I was so waiting for a decent fic showing what happened with the couples between season 2 and 3.

And the ending with Mei recording the message was sooo good. You rock, I'm reading this fic over and over again (like your every fic anyway ;).

I love this! It's a very interesting take on everything- the idea that Mei wants what Tia and Rocket have because it's not perfect, it's real seems plausible. And you always write Tia/Rocket well and make it interesting and complicated. If you did write more I'd be interested to read it!