At the beginning it said 'lost your able to see' I think you should change able to ability. I also thInk that Ned, Ted, and Sinead (did I spell her name right?) are triplets, and Ned and Ted aren't just twins. But if u knew that, I can see why you said 'twin' the bond between Ned and Ted is (or used to be, according to your story) stronger than the bond between Sinead. And it would be weird to say 'his own triplet' or 'his other third' so... Yeah... I'm rambling on now... What else... Oh! I loved the story, and thought it showed a lot of depth and feeling. PEACE!

No mistakes . . . It was really sweet. True, Reagan is an extraordinary Holt. I'm more of a Ted/Reagan fan, because of the tenth book, AND in The Medusa Plot, since they were stuck together. Five years isn't much of a difference :) Thank goodness.

Whoa...that was emotional, your story literally ripped my heart apart and gave it back to me. I love it.

Amy, that was simply heartbreaking.

Wow. That was kind of sad for Ted, losing his brother over a girl, plus being betrayed for a girl. This was pretty good though, there isn't any other stories that are about the Starling twins.

-whitecallily13

That was breathtaking. I was seriously crying. Can you do it in Reagan's POV?

Short review:

No CC this time.

This was my favorite piece from you, EVER. As in, EVER ever. As in, better than every one of your other twenty-five stories. I LOVE THIS.

/decides to advertise it on profile/

Yes.

/sigh/

But I must CC in some shape or form, or else the review will make me look like a fangirl.

Hmm...

In the first paragraph: it would be fine without the italics, which look a bit redundant. Oh, and make the last sentence of that paragraph a paragraph of its own.

GAH. That CC took a while to find. xD

20/10.

~Smiles xInfinity,

Joyce

OHMYGOSH THIS IS AMAZING.

:D

ONE THING ONLY, though. /Inwardly, Amy sighs, "Joyce canNOT go one review without criticizing the author." She groans for effect./ xD

"So why'd you kiss her?

Right in front of him."

Maybe: "So why'd you kiss her right in front of him?"

But that totally works too. Just a suggestion.

This may be one of my favorite works from you. It's right next to the one I just reviewed... GAH. /forgot title/ /goes to another tab to look up/ A Loving Lie. :)

Wonderful job!

~Smiles x3000,

Joyce

~Favorited and in it goes to my community~

Oh goodness.

The ending was so powerful, I loved it. It was such a deep thing to say, and it means so much as a reader to feel this almost broken connection Ned and Ted have. Your use of short sentences was quite effective, especially in the beginning and near the end. I didn't notice any grammatical/spelling errors (of course, I didn't expect to). This is very lovely, and a great resource for me actually, haha. I've been working on a two-shot also, and I've been having trouble entertwining them. So this has been a very enjoyable and useful read to me.

You're such a role model, Amy. :) I know I've told you that several times, but you really are. And I hope that everyone else enjoyed this as much as I did!

Au revoir,

~Summer

Wow woe is Ned? Or Ted? I always get the 2 confused it doesn't matter which ones blind and which one has brain probs I can't keep em straight!

THIS IS AWESOME HOW CAN YOU MAKE IT THE END!

Awwww! Poor Ted. I always liked Dan/Reagan and Ned/Natalie. Ned seemed a little stuck up to me in the 1st book. You did amazing,as usual. Only,Ted would have been able to know what she looks like. Like at Grace's funeral. You should do a chapter from Reagan's POV.

N'aww, this is sad, yet sweet. I'm 100% Ted/Reagan, but this is pretty cool(:

You write really well. ~Jealous~

I thought Reagan was dirty blonde, though. Oh, well. Great work!

-MW98

Hiya, it's me.

Oh, how I've missed reviewing. Anyway, I really liked this two-shot, I did. It was great, I enjoyed reading it.

However, in Ned's point of view, didn't he say that Sinead told Ted?

In Ted's view, you said that Ned told Ted by accident. Eh.

Anyway, great job!

9/10!

~Ari

That was bittersweet, wasn't it? I loved it. :)

I liked the personality that you gave the Starling twins. Not much is said about them in the books. They are tragically ignored, really. I guess that's where FF comes into play, isn't it? ;)

One particular error stood out at me.

"she would ever have approached you had you not been blinded."

It really felt like there should be a comma before had. It just sort of threw me off the first time I read it.

Emotion was another fabulous aspect. It was perfect.

Overall, fabulous story. Love it. :)

~Syberia~