Ah, the pressures and struggles of teenage girl. I'm glad Huey was there to come with her. I definitely wouldn't want her to go it alone.

Love the ending

Jazmine has a great taste in music : D.

this is beautiful.

Awesome, I love this song. And so sweet, he's going with her to start a new life. Such a nice ending though I feel bad for her parents. They should've been there to stop her... But they weren't.

i like it but, there some thing that confuses me. Huey and Jazmine are the same age and in the beginning of the story Huey was 14. So two 14 year olds are going to make it in New York? Huey is smart but that smart to get into college at a young age, I don't think so. I don't know if it's was just a typo or watever but it tripped me up through the whole fic. I don't want to be mean but..yeah. It was good other than that.

Very Huey-like

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this is cutte and yoou made the charactrsz exactly the same as in the show

Excellent story! I'd like to see a sequel made whenever you can!

I really loved this story. Hopefully you'll consider expanding upon this story. :)

This story is three-dimensional because Huey would sacrifice everything just to ensure Jazmine was safe. Not too many people would care that much to leave a good life behind just for the sake of another girl's safety. But when Huey (who apparently could get into a prestigious college) decides to go with Jazmine into an uncertain life, that shows how much he deeply cares about her. As they always say, actions do speak louder than words.

Can't wait to read "A Second Life!"

-Ian

oh my god, please continue this. it was great.