I think those apps are all hilarious. And so was this! Great job as always.

Well, well, soldier...

LOL

LMAO

ROFL

This was...X_x

ROFLOL

And an iPhone app? O.o Seriously? ROFLMAO

Nice work, marine!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

lol when im pmsy the last thing i wold do is clean. i just get sick, sore and bitchy. not the best idea to go to ur boyfriends house for dinner with the parent at that time of the month, she shoulda listened to her teammates

BAHAHAHAHAHAA!

Having Mariam be the most lovely of daughter-in-laws-to-be when it's time of the month is just pure genius! :D

It makes me giggle that Judy thought Mariam might be pregnant. Hahahaa. Max and Mariam would have beautiful babies :D

Excellent!

O_O;; there's iPhone apps for that. Now I've seen everything!

That was an interesting fanfiction indeed, about PMS. Not many guys know about it until it's too late...

Either way, nice job!

Haha! This made me laugh -

A nice original idea and it was well written so easy to read

well what an intresting title to come across, so funny, the writings all smoth if that makes sense but this was just so funny and i like the idea of Mariam being all really nice it'd fit welll because her first languadge is sarcasm and therese an Iphone app for PMS i don't know wheater to laugh slap my forehead in frustration or just never buy an iphone

Hooray! Surprised with greatness after a few hours of homework. Almost missed this too because of the short summary, then I caught hint of your name and was all - score! XP I remember gasping about PMS-ing Mariam, I don't so much remember requesting it. I say always open your virtual mouth so I can just yell out random requests. Your request for me was from forever forever ago. So I think that's even. XP

Anyway, onto the actual concept of the story. Really wasn't expecting this, especially the beginning. I've never actually seen anyone act like that when they were PMS-ing, being delightful I mean. Personally, I'm pretty moody. XD But oh man, everything was just so... ugh, in a good way, a good ol' UGH. XP

First of all, hint at le legs, awesome. Made me laugh. I would love to hear about that one time personally. I think Judy went "Zilla" in like... ten minutes flat. I also liked how Max pinched himself to see if he was dreaming. But that kid has some randomly weird dreams I've noticed, at least in the stuff you give me. XP

Also, pinacle of the bestness (real term XD) is when Judy asks if Mariam is pregnant. I bet she always has that concern, daily. Max should get used to that question. As a side note, I think Mr. Tate had the urge to high five Max at that question and go tell his friends. I really liked the delivery of Max saying no to his Mom, the whole: "... he and Mariam hadn't done that, so she wasn't…that other word." I thought it was greatly amusing. Mr. Tate is pouting though. XD Oh, and Judy's tangent about how she wouldn't be mad, but wonder where she went wrong was also greatness in a basket.

Another great moment was Judy's reaction to Mariam not being pregnant - oh, let's traumatize the boy, maybe that won't make him run off to the arms of another woman that you hate. XD Poor Mr. Tate. Mariam's innuendos (sounds like a strange store) are always fantastic. I have a feeling Max would prefer to be covered in Mariam's lipstick. You and you risqueness. XP Always good for a laugh.

Oh! Oh! Oh! Also, way to throw in like thirty billion of our jokes. XD And by thirty billion, I mean like two. The virgo jibe made me laugh. Judy's been consulting Hilary on the side, I see. Or looked into it herself for some type of astrological reason they shouldn't be together. XP Also, I feel the need to say Mariam whips her hair back and forth. XD Sorry, that just popped into my little head.

When Judy called her husband Tate, I thought you were insinuating that his name was Tate Tate, which I think we discussed, would be hilarious. XD Also, yes for the couch joke. The couch joke needed to be said.

I'm thinking Max must live on a non-well-travelled car road if their feet are dangling onto the road. XP That's honestly the first thing I thought of when I read the second section (also, line breaks are working for you again - whoo). Michael and Eddy should have been there. Also, Rick. XD Judy is probably intolerable on the best of days. I think Max should be careful about laughing, or his Mom will make him share the couch with his Father. XD How weird would that be.

Anyway, I thought Mariam was in character. Characters can try to be nice once in a while. XP I just thought she was trying to get on Judy's good side at first. So no worried there. I can't see the appeal of following that up with an iPhone app... I thought most people just knew. I guess it could also be used for people trying to get pregnant... but I'm sure there's an app for that. I want a MaxMariam app. XD Not that I have an iPhone, I just want one to exist.

Didn't see any mistakes! I don't think so anyway. I actually only read through this once, so the review may seem more all over the place. Or not. XP

Thanks so much for this! It's just so amazing and funny and great and the good ugh. XD Yeah! I just wrote a novel of a review... eh... sorry? XD Awesomeness once again. You make me happy.