This was absolutely amazing! You are so talented! I’ve never seen such good writing in such a sort fic. It was very enjoyable to read and I really loved it!

I loved the fact that how subtly you included those small details and not revealing it directly but letting us figure everything out for ourselves.
You have a very charming way of presenting the story and converting them into words which just flow smoothly.
You should keep writing more often. :)

WHAT? That's the end?
Aargh! Please update/write a sequel!

Oh, I do wish that there was more of this fic to read as I would love to see them getting together! Brilliant writing here honey! ;o)

Oi! We need a sequel mate!

No more chapters?

So sweet
Please continue other stories
Peace
Lots of love ,
Leanne

Cool ;)
Lots of love
Leanne

Awesome :)
Is lilly gonna be okay ?

Lots of love,
Leanne

Aww how cute

I absolutely loved how you put Eliza Boyd in this, your connecting the stories and it's nice to see Sirius thinking about her xx

AMAZING! Omg, it was confusing at first, but now I get it, completely. They asked James to come over so Lily would see him and just had amortentia and OMG, THIS IS TOO CUTE. SHE WAS IMMUNE BECAUSE SHE ALREADY LOVED HIM AND THE SPELL BROKE OFF BECAUSE HE ALREADY LOVED HER, OM, OMG, OMG. PLLLLLEEEAAASSEEE MAKE A SEQUEL !

And I was right about James. Very interesting line with Lily. I'm sad that this is over -I would really enjoy a final chapter where they get together.

I think I'm right about James. Still a bit confused with Lily but I'm assuming it's a marauders plan gone wrong.

Wow. This chapter has been intense and confusing. It is very well written and I can't wait to read further. I think I know what's up with James .. .