Why. Why must there be so much angst?!

Such a great story.

Awwwwww little wing you are not a poison AT ALL.
Please understand Jay your pain will be forever gone if you just come back home to your daddy, to grandpa and to your brothers... ooooohhhhhh love it.

This story made me feel allllll the feels. I love your dialogue, it's just so perfect. I kept having to pause in the story to quote the best bits of it to my mom, which is always the make of a great story. You have a real gift. I'm definitely going to go read the rest of your work!

Oh my gosh, this is pure gold 3

A very good character driven story. I liked the way you presented the characters.

BUT, then came the closing scene, and that was POWERFUL! That scene took this fic to a higher level. Greatly Done!

Thank-you for this Wondrous read. :)

This is so beautiful. I love how you wrote Jason it really is good. I love Jason so much and you portrayed him beautifully. Thank you.

There's some good emotional complexity here. Very nice, and I wish the comics took advantage of it more often. Definitely going on my favorites list.

You do have some spelling errors though, so maybe get this beta'ed? For example, "steak" is meat and "stake" is the usage you're looking for. "Manner" is like the "manner in which you do something" and manor is the house.

So good! I loved Bruce and Jason's interaction. Blessings, Sophia

It's so nice to hear one of them calling Bruce dad.

I like this. I like all three stories (will read the rest soon), but my heart goes to this one. Of all his sons, Jason's relationship to Bruce is always something hard to do right...it's so very difficult to express.

awesome

So beautiful. So sad. It made me wanna cry.

:') :') Finally Tim and Damian getting along! 3

thanks for the write!