Harry is certainly a busy guy, now we just have Hermione left, I'm guessing if he had stayed in the bath there would have been no shriek from Hermione... at least not initially :-)

Perhaps she did see him leave, could be a nice little revelation for next chapter, for her to drop a hint or two to tease him with.

I am a sucker for Harry/Luna stories, and I love this series so far. I know it's been a while since you have updated, so I am going to sit patiently :)

You should put in a Harry, Luna, Hermione threesome

I've been enjoying this, especially your portrayal of the sexy, confident, nearly insatiable Luna.

Unlike many other commenters here, though, I'm a true Harry/Ginny fan and disagree with many of the comments calling her a 'fan girl' She's actually the only person in the whole series who never took any of Harry's 'poor me, pity me' bullshit and was never afraid to put him in his place.

And I love the way Hermione is cozying up to Harry, even though I suspect she's not doing it for any sexual reasons, but just because she loves him as a friend.

Threesomes? I love threesomes. While I doubt if it's your intent, this story has the makings of a truly awesome foursome!

Very interested in where the next chapter will take us.

So what did Hermione do to stop the two red heads from killing her? And does Harry wish to save Hermione from Ronald? How long before it all go to hell?

Thanks for sharing your story. Please update soon.

damn luna is one horny girl lol update soon

very nice smut :P, though i am partial to some harry/hermione action even harry/hermione/luna :P its all good and it seems hermione might be into it to

and finally luna has it! hehe moving around nicely liking it 3

Story Added to C2: Harry's Lemonade Stand

Can't wait 4 the next chapter

Update soon plz.

Young love. But Harry would have never left Hermione behind to face the wrath of Ginny and Ronald alone giving up her chance of freedom. At least the Lovegoods had a library and even the hide would have books on wildlife to read, while Ronald burnt his old text books. Going back they will see how terribly Ginny and Ronald have treated Hermione because they did not get what they greedily wanted.

Luna was use to being alone at home with the hours her father worked and only went to the Weasley because Harry and Hermione would be there. If Hermione had come with them, Ginny's rage would have been dumped on Ronald because he failed to control Hermione. She may have tried to find them but Dobby would have protected them. For Hermione it would be heaven to be near Harry and in a library. They could have asked Dobby to bring their things.

Well let us see how Hermione has survived the abuse and maybe Harry might just take better care of his very best friend who cares for him and his happiness more than her own.

Thanks for sharing your story. Please update soon.

Hopefully sooner than last time. Ensuing arguments between Harry and the Weasley clan next chapter?

frist off well done VERY well done. I always loved luna in the books and movies.

ok now to the feedback. please dont ruin this glorious work with a three some. if Hermione's going to be in this have as the support she is doing now or as a look out. i feel said for ginny but i always thought she was just going after harry cause he was " the boy who lived" and nothing else then fame.

ps cause well i seem to just be re-stating what others have said ( but yea they make good points) the sex scene was very rushed. i understand that harry was all worked up and its hard to hold back but come on this was super huge for them in the realtionship build it up and then slowly come down. just thinking it could have been a sweeter and more romantic moment.

all in all after me ranting on i just have to say this " update quickly its boring sitting here with a broken pelvis" lol thanks and cant wait to see what happens next

hello! i have read all this serie, i found it first in harrypotterfancition and i really loved it, its recomforting that you are not making this great story into a threesome!

btw i have leave you very short reviews because i was reading it from my ipod touch

Ohhh, Harry, the Gryffindor Stud! :D

Seriously, I never understood how much LSD Jo had sniffed before pairing Harry up with the Red Devil! That relationship would have never worked in real life; fangirl interests never form a firm base for a normal relationship.

Both H/Hr and H/L are more feasible pairings, IMHO, but we already knew that :D

Just when Harry got enough on his mind, what with the sudden next level in his relationship with Luna, he needed to discover that Hermione's also a girl? Seriously, wake up, boy! She is just the purrfect gurrl for you! I foresee GREAT complications here. Goody! BTW, Emma Watson in a see-thru nightie? Yummy! :D

One small remark: Harry should have brought the idea of breaking up with Ginny to her in a somewhat different way. Why his intentions pure and his reasons understandable, the way it happened made the whole thing complicated. Otherwise, I applaud you for an intriguing and well-written chapter.