Nice interaction. Very brother/other me fun. Thanks.

Funny. cute and sweet

I liked this
A lot
Your really good with the characters
Great work

Of course they would bond over a game. They're lovable dorks like that. :)

Aww... Somehow I think of my own experience when I read this- Yuugi and Yami were very in-character. Thanks for sharing!

Awww, this is ridiculously cute. Great work on portraying Yugi and Yami in a non-life-threatening scenario. :)

luv this

Sweet story. :)

I loved that Yami was being unfair for some reason.

So sweet. I loved who you portrayed Yami and Yugi. Perfectly done! I can totally see Yugi getting all hot and bothered when Yami wouldn't let him cheat. I know the same feeling. Now with this wonderful story in my head, I'm gonna go play some video games myself!

May the writing gods be with you!

*Exasperated sigh* Are you going to make me go to your profile all the time for extra stories?

Well this was really great! My favourite part about it was that you actually made Yugi seem like a guy. I think Yugi is always too cute because girls write about him. I quite liked that you made him a lot more boyish. And I thought the maniacal laughter was pretty funny ;D. I do that when I play The Legend of Zelda. All the time. Screaming at monsters is fun XD.

Great job on the story. You know I always love everything you write _.

XD AW! This is gorgeous! Rock on! XD The other type of 'gamer' instance rules! *U* Wonderful characterization and style, as well as keeping them light and witty! XD Rock on! As always, I LOVE your work! *U*

Lovely. Very lovely. It left me feeling all warm and fuzzy. :)

You have such an enviable ability to keep these two characters IC. Whenever I read one of your stories I am left with the feeling that I'm actually watching a bonus episode or something. This "episode" in particular was highly entertaining, and I just love the playful interaction between the two. Although I do wonder which game Yugi was playing? And how long it took him to beat it? Of course, the resident show-off Spirit would undoubtably claim the ultimate high score...at least for a while. ;)

My sister usually grabs the magazine (or pamphlet or whatever kind of semi-helpful literature can be found close at hand) while I bust my way through a new game, figuring out the controls as I go while she tells me all this useless information about the side-tunnels and hidden gems I missed. So this story had personal appeal to it as well, since I could closely identify with Yugi. xD But that only made it sweeter to read.

And then there's our ever-patient Yami, being such a good sport (despite his boredom) because he loves little Yugi so very much. What a pair. And then there's playful little Yugi, always at some sort of disadvantage to his stronger counterpart at the beginning... but somehow able to overcome and one-up him at the end.

It was a very adorable story to read, and I quite enjoyed it. What a splendid surprise to find in my inbox today. :)

Very cute. Yami was a little unfair about the magazine.

Oh, I understand the feeling exactly. Blowing up stuff on a video game is so much fun, especially when it's first person shooter.

Nicely Written.