Awww, poor Prowlie! I'll save you! XD

Oh god this has to be one of the funniest crack stories I have read. Ratchet really should learn when to throw his wrench. To throw or not to throw...

Ouch with the doorwings being eaten. Poor Prowl

This is brilliant! xD

I loved the style you had going here.

"Why, precisely, the troublesome duo thought that this was a good idea, we may never know." & "Legend now says that his scream could be heard form the ark clear to the Decepticon base."

These lines were fantastic, I grinned so widely!

My tiniest little constructive point would be this, if it's what I think anyway: "surroundings-ere go:"

Do you mean ergo?

Anyway, this didn't detract from the story at all- and despite that fact the story itself isn't long at all, it still made me giggle!

Good stuff! xD

Poor Prowl what a wild Ride he had good story nice work.

Poor Prowl *hugs him*

Ouch! Poor Prowl! *Snickers* It is funny, though.