and... i cried... :P good story though!

This was great. And I liked how they had faith that they would see eachother in Heaven. My sis' name is Eliana! Cool when she regenerated, didn't expect that. Also, loved the "fantastic" speech where she was dying. Great writing.

Did you hear that...

THAT WAS MY HEART BREAKING INTO A MILLION PEICES! **visibly calms down in the background** It was a really good one-shot though. Everything before Rose regenerates is my new go-to head canon for what happens to the clone Doctor and Rose.

You made me cry.

This made me cry SO hard. I usually don't like the human Doctor. I mean honestly, why do fanfiction authors think the Doctor would be content to be John Smith for the rest of his life? I've already read Chances Come in Threes and A Chance at Forever. I might have to read them again. And again. And oh, I am so crying. You're an awesome writer.

this is the first story that has ever made me cry.

Beautiful and devastating... poor Rose, now completely understanding of the Doctor's hesitancy to love too deeply. Heart broke during last moments with human Doctor. Interested to see where you'll take this. :)

You are one of two who make Doctor Who storys that I belive that really do it right. Mortality and Second Chances was just too good, this is the first time I have every like the human Doctor! 3

i guess it's a bit backwards, but i'm going to go and start reading Chances Come In Threes now. great story!

This story has been told before, but you packed all the emotion of it into a quick read. Very well done with an excellent voice and tone. The dialogue was very good.

Awwww so sad and beautiful.

Hummm yet another awsome story

Amazing prequel.

You made me really cry. Beautiful story

Awww that was so sad. When he died I was reminded of my story and how I need to whip out that sequel. lol. Very cute!